Honkai: Star Rail: I Am Qin Shi Huang

You are so petty. You are an immortal and Qin, and the reward of ten thousand taels of gold is of no use. There is a lot of gold in the universe. Also, he was granted the title of Grand Marshal of the Army, but only three thousand soldiers and horses could be mobilized? One can imagine how far you, Immortal Qin, are.

I am Qin Shihuang, V I am fifty, when I come back to life, I will make you a general.

It's too poisonous. Just one sword has the combat power of 400,000 people. Compared with the commander, when did the commander become so weak? The author is definitely a cloud player.

There is not much of a problem in itself, but there is one thing that makes people feel uncomfortable. That is, in the thirteen thousand years of the Qin Dynasty, has there not been a woman comparable to Ji Zi? The content written by the author always gives me a feeling of "Wow, this Jizi is so outstanding. Even if the Qin Dynasty is 13,000 years old, I can't find a woman who can compare with her. This is the perfect candidate for the queen!" I admit that Jizi is very good, but what you write is too exaggerated.

The writing is quite good, but the titles need to be unified. Sometimes I am the King of Qin, sometimes I am the King, and sometimes I am His Majesty. I always feel very different.

It's because I didn't recognize my own strength and forced myself to write a book that I wasn't good at. First of all, I am a pure layman when it comes to Da Qin and Xiu Xian. Then Beng Tie, after finishing the plot for so long without reviewing it, I almost forgot all the impressions of the characters, and the ooc was so annoying. I thought I could write it, but after chapter 5, the problem gradually became apparent. The pace was too slow and the word count was seriously bloated. We are not this material at all, and if we continue writing, it will be clear and watery. Me, I'll stop first Brother, is that okay?

10 Points for imagination, 2 points for plot

The ability to kill 400,000 people with one sword is far inferior to the Envoy, and even inferior to the Herrscher of Spring Breeze. After all, that was before the Qin Dynasty cultivated immortality.

The problem with the framework is too big and the plot is too weak. There is no point in writing it and it will only cause more and more criticism.

You could say this is history, but it's not history. You could say it's not history, but it's history. I don't know how to describe this novel... I think you can change the combat power and improve the setting.