
Bengtie Yuanshen: in the Second Creation Space, They Broke Through the Defense
崩铁原神:二创空间,她们破防了
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- Sci-Fi & Gaming
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- Virtual MMORPG
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- For men
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- 2y ago
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How many words are there? How many transformed characters are there? Lady Elf, God of Thunder, King of Knights, Twinkle... Moreover, at the end of a knight event, two new characters, Slime and Kurumi, were directly unlocked. Are you so eager to use the new characters to attract readers' expectations? Originally, the King of Knights had a lot of potential in the event, and you have already unlocked the black fur form. Why not just show up in the northern and southern hemispheres as your final trump card? She is no less powerful than her mother, Shiny. She would rather brush up the materials to unlock Shiny on the spot than to grind out the materials that make her stupid. Wouldn't it be awkward for you to ask your mother to do a knight activity? Moreover, Niang Shining is also a character with considerable potential. She is used as a trump card here, and two new characters are unlocked immediately afterwards. Is there any plot space for Shining to play? Not to mention the fairy lady who is the title of this book? How long has it been since you had a role? It seems that the writing of the first two characters is okay. The subsequent characters appear just like choosing a hero in an online game. They have a skin and skill set, but their personality charm and soul are not reflected at all. Daimao's belief as the King of Knights was not shown, and he saw that he was ridiculed at the beginning, and then broke the city with a curry stick, and then the king turned black and slashed the opponent to the King of Knights? Wouldn't it be the same if you replaced Thor? Niang Shining's scene was even more rushed. The only thing that can reflect the characteristics of this character is a few foul-mouthed sentences about Wang Cai and a bombardment, but nothing else. No characteristics of a tyrant or a wise king are shown at all. They are basically just temporary tools for fighting. The level of care in the description is completely different from the two characters in the beginning. I have to say that the setting at the beginning is a poisonous point. They have already transformed, so why can't they just transform into Alicia directly? At least it's fun to interact with beautiful girls with Alicia's appearance, words and deeds. At least as long as I keep writing, no matter how many new characters are created, the main body will still fit the title. In the end, I was thinking about your original heroine transformation, and I didn't see how attractive the heroine was after the original transformation. I just relied on the school beauty buff and Alicia's halo to forcibly enhance my charm. By the way, if I didn't mention it, who would remember that the protagonist has a sister? I really don't understand why people who write national series like to add a sister to the protagonist, and then soon the character will disappear and the protagonist will return to the list of orphans...
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