Honkai Impact: I Am Making Waves, and There Are No Taboos!

It really looks like a novel. I really like the Mingchao fanfic, but it's a bit uncomfortable to write it in such an awkward way... Why do the dialogues between the characters seem so awkward, and the protagonist talks a lot and asks questions all day long. There's no depth to his words, and the protagonist doesn't seem to have that kind of temperament. He doesn't have any real character for such a big story. The protagonist feels like a fledgling innocent and silly Baitian who suddenly gained the invincible power of Mingchao.

Great subject matter, but your writing makes my brain spin

I feel like the pace is too slow. Can you speed it up?

Imashi not only has white hair and eyebrows

I see that the total number of words in your previous works has been less than 3 million words. Why is it that this book is written like a novice, and the writing style is relatively... Immature? It's not at the level that an old author should have. 1. Ling Yin was written as Ling Yi, from the first chapter to almost thirty chapters, and the previous ones have not been changed. 2. When writing dialogues, I always add a modal particle, like hey hey hey haha um um, one or two sentences is fine, but more will greatly affect the perception. 3. As for the poisonous point, it doesn't matter at the moment, but the female body that the protagonist squeezed in the first few chapters counts as half. What I'm most afraid of is that I will use it later to make the protagonist change her gender into a woman.

I've read a little bit so far, so I can't comment on it yet, but Yin and Yi are two different characters, and it's Ling Yin, not Ling Yi!

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