More Children, More Blessings: I, Jia Dairu, Forcefully Take Qin Keqing as My Wife

I have finished reading the book, and it is generally good. The author deliberately avoided the bad points and just wore it, which is good. However, there are also a few flaws that are worth mentioning. First, when the protagonist mentions Qin Keqing to Jia Zheng, he directly calls him Qin Keqing. There is actually a bug here. In the original work, no one in the Jia family knew the nickname Keqing. Jia Baoyu was sleepwalking in Taixu fantasyland and subconsciously shouted "Keqing, save me". After hearing this, Qin Keqing secretly wondered, feeling strange and wondering why he knew this nickname. Therefore, the protagonist directly calls out Qin Keqing's nickname here. From Jia Zheng's perspective, it would also be very strange. And there is no reason to tell outsiders the nickname of his future wife? What's more, this person is the descendant of the protagonist. Second, the monthly payment is set too high. I remember that in the Jia family, Sanchun and Daiyu only got 20 taels a month. Jia Mu and Mrs. Wang only got 20 taels a month. You gave Qingwen 50 taels a month for a concubine. It is really outrageous.

He should be a Chess Saint, a Soldier Saint, a Martial Saint, not a Grandmaster. I feel like Grandmaster doesn't sound impressive enough.

Very good, work hard! Write well! Juvenile!

The reward setting is unreasonable. Qin Keqing belongs to one of the twelve golden hairpins in the main book, and the reward is given to a purple girl. Qingwen and Yuanyang in front belong to the secondary book. One is for the master-level Bajiquan and the other is for Xu Chu. Comparing the two, the golden hairpin in the main book is actually about the same reward as the golden hairpin in the secondary book. Do you think this setting is reasonable? Unless your purple girl is written completely according to the original version, with Qin Dynasty skills, and Xu Chude is a historical or romantic version, and the world where the protagonist lives is unmysterious. In this unmysterious background, it is barely reasonable to give a character with a low martial arts template. Otherwise, if the main volume and the secondary volume are rewarded at the same level, then what's the difference?

The salary of the servants in the mansion is really not low. The price of five taels is comparable to that of the people in the palace. In the past, I read that only the first- and second-class waiters with some respect could have the salary of Jia Yun's three taels.

Author, you are going to write about He Shen and pretend to be Sima Yi. I am afraid that the next emperor will kill you directly as He Shen.

Because it was banned at the beginning, it has not been released for a day. I am really sorry that it affects your reading.

Write it well and I'll give you all the money. Stop cutting books, you'll end up like that Konoha Red Mansion. Also, I would like to see how many people watch your main character, an old man.

The author who has eaten too many movies. Dare to write anything. Jia Dairu is nothing in the Red Mansion. An old man in his seventies or eighty. Qin Keqing kept his identity hidden. She can be considered the daughter of a fifth-rank official.

I don't know why the protagonist has to cut off all contact as soon as he travels to Jia's house. Wouldn't he die faster if he cuts off all contact? Why was the Jia family able to turn over in the end? Wasn't it because of these relationships that it could turn over?