Period: From the Start, I Married a Female Educated Youth and Her Younger Sister Came Along

You obviously have a woman, but you want to find someone else's wife. If you write like this, you can only say that it is a piece of rat shit, spoiled a pot of porridge, and has a unique taste.

Another one who has a golden finger but insists on writing as an ordinary person? Does the author not even dare to dream? It is because of this kind of concept that you writers write in the same way. No matter how bad people are, you can talk about the protagonist. You are really enough! No wonder they shout every day that the data is not good and they are not making money.

At that time, gangsters were punishable by gun and even had a harem.

I don't understand one thing. With Feilu, why don't you grow medicinal materials?

Raise so many things, make so much money, don't do it if you have medicinal materials, raise shrimps, fish, and pheasants every day, what the heck, prepare to be the largest supplier in the 21st century in the future, what's the use of writing so much? What the hell, in the village, the villagers who can't even recognize a word are pretending to be cool in front of the captain? Prepare to develop into a body that can withstand nuclear bombs before leaving the village?

At the system collection point, please enter "666 to collect!"

I was hooked when I saw the second chapter. This protagonist is like a stupid idiot. If you can't write emotional articles, don't write them. The person in question is a prostitute. He jumped into it after just a few sentences. What a fucking piece of rubbish he wrote.

Pushing too many women out at once, making it too superficial and a drag

After all, this is a rural area, and there are relatively few single women of working age, many of whom have already given birth to children. In addition, they have to work hard to earn work points, and even fewer are beautiful. I'll add new people when I go to the city later.

Find me a book. The protagonist is reborn in the 1980s and 1990s and sleeps with his sister's best friend. The heroine is an educated youth who went to the countryside.