You’re the Villain, So Why Are You Becoming a Mythic Transcendent?

Keep writing, don't go downhill, book it all

After reading the beginning, I feel pretty good, but the author has made the system too self-aware. This setting is actually not good.

I finished watching it, and overall it was okay, except for the pacing problem. The show of the saints at the beginning was good, but the plot in the middle and at the end felt like it took a long time to build up, but the climax couldn't be reached and it collapsed quickly. You wrote the epiphany plot very well, but after adding the villain script, it always felt a little off. The reader's focus is actually limited. A plot about making a fake come true or manifesting a saint, or a plot about a villain's revenge, are actually quite interesting. However, these two are combined together. If you want to write well, you have to look at your skills. Otherwise, it is easy to focus on one point and lose sight of the other. The reader is attracted by one point, and then you end up focusing on another point. You write both sides, but neither side is written well.

The protagonist is also dressed as a villain, and then fabricates a global super. Then the center of the world is no longer the original protagonist, and other people are more eye-catching than the protagonist. Will the Child of Destiny still be the protagonist? How could Long Aotian, a warrior in the extraordinary world, be like that?

To be honest, these female protagonists and supporting bitches are really a**, and they are just admiring the original host, so**,**

It would be fine if the protagonist really did something bad. He was obviously a favor to them, but in the end they refused to retaliate. Also used as a watchman to set up an archway

Holy shit, the author actually published a new book! Can this be written down? The subject matter of each of the author's books is good, but it's a pity that the results are not good enough. I hope this one is not like The Eunuch. Also, please don't change the author's account. I can't read it even if I want to see whether a new book has been opened. I saw it by chance this time.

No one is watching, there is no traffic, it is really not unfair, the plot is a bit draggy, and the first few chapters are not very well written. The main thing is to emphasize what the villain is like, and it depends on them to regret and how to take revenge. The result is that it has been procrastinating. Although they have the power, they are not allowed to take revenge. They can only kill some small minions. Talk about Really, I feel wronged for those people in the company. When the two sons of the boss are fighting, the people below must be looking at which side has the advantage. How else can they intervene? Just because they have appeared in the plot, you have to kill them. The other people who are taken lightly are important. You can't kill them. In Feilu, who would like to watch this kind of plot if you do it?

Are those women dead?

The system has been rolled up these days.