
All Heavens: a Person Eats a Devil Fruit at the Beginning of the Game in an Apartment
诸天:人在公寓开局吃下恶魔果实
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 124k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Film & TV Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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So what is the significance of the existence of pig's feet written here? Just to gain favorability? Boring
You did not specifically point out the difference between exclusive golden eggs and customer golden eggs. This may cause some readers to misunderstand. Not only does the protagonist have no right to deal with golden eggs, he cannot afford to buy golden eggs. Even the quality of the only golden eggs obtained is the same as usual. The probability of winning the grand prize There is no difference from ordinary customers, that is, everyone who comes to buy golden eggs, including Sun Shangxiang and others. This makes a serious mistake, that is, the protagonist loses his sense of uniqueness. Let me ask, who would like a protagonist who has no autonomy and whose status and treatment are not as good as ordinary customers? It is precisely because you did not specifically point out the difference between exclusive golden eggs and customer golden eggs that the protagonist's positioning is unclear, leaving such a big loophole. Of course, it can be found that in Chapter 27, you seem to be trying hard to reveal the unique characteristics of the protagonist's golden eggs through detailed disclosure. But this is ultimately a vague and obscure statement, which cannot conceal the possibility that the protagonist obtains gains by relying on probability and luck, and what everyone wants is an image that must be very different from ordinary people in terms of special treatment. I have to admit that the protagonist you wrote has a certain deviation from the image in the readers' minds.
The author is He Jiong, not He Ling.
Hehe, I didn't want to read Chapter 10 because it was too poisonous.