Traveling Through the Heavens, You Can't Detonate and Devour the City at the End of the Game

The author's narrations are quite good, but they did not describe the status of Alicia and Velvet in detail. How could Alicia be so heartbroken and regretful for the rest of her life? If it were just like writing an account book, it would be meaningless. Who would regret their life if the person they like marries someone else? It must be through a lot of narration that you can know that the protagonist is so important to Alicia.

Zero One is the real master knight, you are just a troublemaker. When Xumakia came to destroy it, you Zero One did not stop it. Instead, you made trouble there and failed to stop it, resulting in more casualties. When I watched the show, it seemed to me that Zero One looked like the villain, but he was hidden very well. Unhelpful

I'm really speechless. After all, Queen Mother Xi is a guest of the Three Thousand Zixiao Palace. How could she not be able to defeat two Taoist boys? The author must have some brains! When the Queen Mother of the West was Daluo Jinxian, what kind of cultivation level did Haotian Yaochi have? Even if they were all quasi-sages, would the Queen Mother of the West not be able to defeat them? **

Can this book stop being unfinished? Can you write some outline? In the last book, I thought you introduced chat** to enrich the plot and write more plots. However, you ended up unfinished halfway through. A good chat** is directly equivalent to not writing at all.

How do you make it watery and dry at the same time?

Except for the first few chapters, I feel very good after that. Author, you can actually write the first few chapters more clearly and concisely, otherwise some readers may not understand it well, and then they may not be able to read the back. One more thing, why do you feel that your book is not very popular? I feel that there are very few readers who can read your book. I was looking for books for more than two hours before I came across this book. It has 160,000 words and there are not many reviews. And it is 160,000 words. Why is it not on the shelves? One more thing, why wasn't it updated yesterday? Don't run away, update quickly

When will the author update? When writing about foot licking, write less, can it look super embarrassing??????????????????????????????????

Not to mention other things, setting the price so low destroys the market. How do people in restaurants, fishermen, and farms survive?

Isn't it good to be idle? You can also start your own business. You must go and be a Seven Star. To be honest, Seven Stars makes me tired from watching them.

In fact, Hermione is not qualified for the position of minister at all, and the teacher is the most suitable, but in the original work, she only takes the position when necessary.

Chapter 3 said that being recognized by five heroes is considered a genius. It turns out that the condition for becoming a favored person is to be recognized by five heroes. This talent is really worthless. . . .

Didn't you say that the Golden Bell Cover is the Dragon and Tiger Gate version? ? Others, Shi Heilong, can block bullets at the 8th level and ignore bullets at the 9th level. Jin Luohan has reached the full level of Dragon Elephant Skill at the 10th level. Why do you only have the confidence to face bullets at 60th level? Could it be that you were deceived by the system?

The content is not good-looking, and you have to subdue it yourself after summoning it, so you might as well just collect the elves directly.

The update is so slow, are you not going to write it?

I don't understand, all the comments on such a frustrating novel are full of praise. The main character's sister is forced into marriage in the Holy Land. The main character is an invincible person. He talks all kinds of cowardly words and nonsense but doesn't do anything. He always says that if he retreats now, everything will be fine.

Instead of writing about demon slayer, it's better to continue writing about mixed martial arts.

After four or five chapters, there is nothing useful at all. Why not write about how many fried dough sticks he ate and how much water he drank.

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