Honkai: Star Rail: Pioneering Gourmet Adventures, with Firefly Picking Up the Tab Like Crazy

Is the protagonist sick? As soon as I woke up, I rummaged through the boxes and cabinets without getting anyone's approval, and took things without telling me. This is the behavior of a thief. At this level of morality, if I were a person on the train, I would definitely kick the protagonist off. If your hands and feet are not clean, if you steal ingredients this time, what will you steal next time? If you don't get out of the car, what are you going to do with this kind of person?

Let me give you a suggestion... The reason why they say you are weak is because you have not had a main plot from the beginning to now. The whole process is like cooking every day, and there is no foreshadowing and no expectations, because you don't have to think about it to know what the plot is like. After eating, others lament that they are not attracted. To put it bluntly, there is no expectation value. Go straight. I suggest you refer to some delicious food and so on, and add some story lines. , Clarify the main line. For example, the protagonist of your system must complete a certain challenge when cooking, and the process of the challenge is the main line. However, your current writing has completely downplayed this. The character design has not been established and the story has not been written. It is all meaningless and unexpected cooking, just like eating porridge for breakfast without side dishes. Of course, this is just my suggestion. Every author who spends time coding deserves respect.

After reading Chapter 20, I only have one feeling: it's too ink-filled. In the first chapter, the time travel was discovered. Chapter 210 was about two things, waking up to make fried rice and making coffee. Then there was a lot of content that could be explained in a few moments and it took almost 10 chapters. The last thing was about one thing, preparing to prepare 13 for the train crew to discover the protagonist's cooking skills. In the middle, it took 10 chapters to make coffee. It's not easy to say that it's not watery.

No, is it really okay for you to pay 1 per day in a place like Feilu? Or are you planning to enter the palace?

How can food that doesn't shine be considered food?

The pig's feet in the front are too faded. As for the back, I'm sorry I don't want to look at the back at all.

So what kind of food does Xingtie have? Are there 8 delicious cuisines? Still think the earthworms are delicious?

This year's author is so good, I've made a meal and haven't finished it yet after reading six chapters. He's really good at water. The sea, you are all water

The ridiculous part of water is half in water and the other half is the author's nonsense. What are you looking at?

I was confused in the first few chapters. No one noticed when you woke up? No one noticed when I was cooking? Pam doesn't know? Ji Zi doesn't know? These two went to bed very late, and they were also 6