Bengtie: Exploring Delicious Food, Liuying Pays for It Like Crazy

Let me give you a suggestion... The reason why they say you are weak is because you have not had a main plot from the beginning to now. The whole process is like cooking every day, and there is no foreshadowing and no expectations, because you don't have to think about it to know what the plot is like. After eating, others lament that they are not attracted. To put it bluntly, there is no expectation value. Go straight. I suggest you refer to some delicious food and so on, and add some story lines. , Clarify the main line. For example, the protagonist of your system must complete a certain challenge when cooking, and the process of the challenge is the main line. However, your current writing has completely downplayed this. The character design has not been established and the story has not been written. It is all meaningless and unexpected cooking, just like eating porridge for breakfast without side dishes. Of course, this is just my suggestion. Every author who spends time coding deserves respect.

No, is it really okay for you to pay 1 per day in a place like Feilu? Or are you planning to enter the palace?

This year's author is so good, I've made a meal and haven't finished it yet after reading six chapters. He's really good at water. The sea, you are all water

So what kind of food does Xingtie have? Are there 8 delicious cuisines? Still think the earthworms are delicious?

Seirin can win to the end without the protagonist, so what's the point of leaving the protagonist? ? ? ? Isn't it exactly the same as the original?

The content is lost between Chapter 7 and Chapter 8 and I can't understand it.

If I remember correctly, the gap between each level in the Dicuo world is very huge. If this level 80 wild boar appears on the sixth floor, then Freya's family members may not be able to do it. Then the problem comes, the strongest Familia cannot be defeated, and the male protagonist's condition cannot be exposed. Once exposed, Freya will easily overtake him in a Familia battle. The result is that soon the wild boar may block the door on the first floor or directly enter Orario, and then Orario will be maimed or even destroyed. Or the dungeon produces a large number of monsters and wild boars directly**

After reading the ** chapter, I feel a little sluggish, and I don't want to read the paid chapters.

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