I'm Developing a Mobile Game in Honkai: Star Rail, and Everyone's Hooked!

You have to think clearly about what our readers want to see! What we want to see is the protagonist inserting into the plot and changing the plot rather than being a background board for the plot to play out.

The number of UIDs in the Xingtie server exceeded 3 million within one minute after it was launched. You are promoting the release of the entire universe, and the protagonist has been live broadcasting for so long, and only a few thousand people have entered the game??? It's so outrageous, it reminds me of a novel about infrastructure construction in Teyvat.

It's really the emperor's golden hoe. It's a mandatory live broadcast game in the universe. The number of people is only tens of thousands, and the recharge is only 100 million. . . . . Then who taught you to put a semicolon after the hundreds digit?

It feels a little unreasonable. The gap between the Star God and the Order is too big. Although the Star God is only a representative of a path in the universe, each of them should have power above the Milky Way level. The Order can destroy stars without hesitation. How many times is the gap? It feels outrageous to mention the Order to the Star God with just a few points.

You really treat other people as fools!

Seeing that the bottom line mechanism has been removed, the protagonist can want to make money, but he cannot be a freshman with no bottom line.

The emotional scenes are really baffling. If you don't know how to write them, you can skip them. It's annoying to watch.

Delete the protagonist! Are they all the same? Didn't someone below say they want to see Masterless? Then just write it like that! To be honest, you really don't understand. Where is your competitiveness? If you want to read books without protagonists, they will go to books without protagonists in the introduction. Most of the people who click here want to read books with protagonists. You offend your base for a small part. I can only say that you are really good at playing.

I want to laugh when I think of Xi'er and Jing Yuan appearing together. Let's not talk about the damage effects. How can I, Xi'er, survive like this?

This book was originally okay, and the setting was okay, but something started to go wrong from the beginning when the protagonist was the second creation, and it was even more speechless later on. Things like second-generation live broadcast rooms are already very offensive to the male protagonist. If you let the male protagonist play another role, you deserve not to be popular. It's okay to have the male protagonist go crazy and live the whole life, but don't take the emotional line, don't touch the harem, and you can't touch the second creation. Once you touch it, no one will be around, and your updates won't be watched. Really no one will watch. Anyway, I**, the author is limited to this, why don't you just cut it and get another one.