Qin Dynasty: Megatron from the Start, While Others Practice Martial Arts, I Cultivate Immortality
秦时，开局威震天别人练武我修仙
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- Ongoing
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- 118k Words
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- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
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- Faloo
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All-time: Reads, Flowers.
52Chapters
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9.7Score
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Reader comments 23
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Inexplicably jumped to Dongsheng Shenzhou and Journey to the West. Sanxiao is not dead yet, and Megatron is dead.
There is no period in the introduction and there is no period in the article?? Author, you are writing an article, not talking to others. There are typos, and the relevant descriptions and foreshadowing are not written, and the plot development is abrupt and abrupt. Why did the protagonist lose his sword, who picked it up, and where. They didn't even explain what Xiaomeng realized from those few deceptive words, and what others learned from Xiaomeng after that. There is no progress, no foreshadowing, nothing. There is no explanation of the protagonist's ability to explore enlightenment. There is no explanation of the protagonist's ability to learn magic. There is not even a name introduction. I thought the name was quite interesting and the content was quite good, but the way it was written was too uncomfortable for me as a reader.
It's hard for Megatron to end like this
Why did the protagonist reveal to King Qin the future of unifying the world? Why does the protagonist's mentality change? Why did a big event suddenly pop up? What is the protagonist's strength? Why is it so overwhelming? Then just go out as soon as you say you want to go out, without anyone accompanying you, and other people won't follow you? Orchid Essence won't follow? Isn't Xiaomeng curious? This characterization is too blunt and casual. And it was only half a year ago. Didn't everyone be on alert that day with Megatron? Like the first nuclear weapon. I thought the new chapter would be better, but it's still the same.
It seems that with the protagonist's current strength and power, he can crush the other five remaining countries and achieve the goal of Cyber Immortality in Qin ahead of schedule. After this goal is completed, will the plot of going to other worlds begin?
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