The Future Revealed: The Dragon Clan Awakens, Shocking the Myriad Worlds

The writing style is average, especially the description of the people of Xiaguo. It is a bit too arrogant. Before the war started, it started fighting with other countries and began to divide the Dragon King's property. It infinitely underestimated the Dragon King's combat power. The people of Xiaguo wrote the same as the Yingguo. If we can't write well, we should have less evaluation and remarks about the country, and write down their actions well. Don't talk too much and do too little like now.

Don't be sensational and passionate without foreshadowing. All men are passionate. This is a very good statement, but when I read it in your writing, it felt like a brainless angry young man screaming wildly. If the writing can't control the plot, try to avoid it. If you use it forcefully, it will only look nondescript.

Dude, don't you like Marvel? The Avengers are all OOC, and the descriptions about them are all your subjective evaluations. You will only drive away readers who like Marvel characters. Those who don't like Marvel will not praise your plot because of it. It only hurts others and does not benefit yourself. Let's write honestly and stop doing these extravagances.

What the hell is the title? It doesn't match the content. I'm confused.

How to put it, I think the country is very strong I just want to bring the country in and write If you have a foreshadowing For example, although there is no Cassel in this parallel world, There are no hybrids but they all have some in their bodies. Special energy bloodline or a bunch of similar Then I have nothing to say if they can get close to the Dragon Clan. But there is no special blood energy or anything like that. If a bunch of ordinary people come close to the Dragon Clan, they are sick. Next, if you want to write about the Dragon Clan, Do you want to use the power of dragons in other worlds? Then because of the gap in the world Do you need strength? It's too strong and has been lowered and sealed. Is it too weak but you can make continuous progress? But in ordinary parallel time and space, dragons appear Then where is your positioning? If it is mainly about dragons Then it's best not to have characters who are stronger than the dragons. In order to make the Dragon Clan look strong, lower the characters that are stronger than the Dragon Clan. It is unwise to become weak Like the Avengers in the article, you can write But don't write about the multiverse Infinity Stones Just limit it to those superhumans with special abilities. Unless your dragon clan's level of combat power is going to increase.

I'm just asking if anyone has read the seven or eight chapters. I'm afraid many people haven't read this book yet.

It's only 40,000 words. Instead of asking if anyone has read it, you might as well write more.

As for Nobita, keep writing! , It's not like no one will read it, just make the title the question, just don't make the title, so write it quickly

Have you seen it? You need to update it first before watching it? Just update seven or eight chapters, who knows? Does it look good?

About "Future Revealed, Dragon Clan's Awakening Shocks All Worlds" written by fans of Zongwu and Zongwu comics Chapter 18 The Dragon King appears, causing global panic! Chapter review.