Max-Level Conceptual Version of the Twelve Talismans, Joining the Chat Group

You can withdraw it. After watching it for a while, Yang Mi and others appeared again.

Don't mess with those celebrities. Who knows how dirty they are, and they'll be guilty if they see them.

I don't see where the max level comes from. In the original version, the essence of a dragon is unlimited energy. It can travel through time and space with magic. A rabbit can also transcend time to a certain extent. There is no upper limit to the power of a cow. It all depends on the user's own foundation.

As far as the introduction is concerned, I shouldn't say the concept version, but should say the high-end version or the enhanced version. It doesn't matter how specific it is, but it has to be written like this. As far as the introduction is concerned, it is not worthy of the concept level. I understand it personally. If there are any mistakes, please let me know. Thank you.

Real dragons cannot be raised in shallow water, so the conceptual ability is unreasonable and has no upper limit. Isn't this one that's a little more powerful than the opponent just to the right of the God's Seat in the Demonic Forbidden City? Can defeat everything. By the way, the complaints are so awesome. At the beginning, I fucked three future female stars. All I can say is that there are many people in the world who are more beautiful than female celebrities.

Sleeping with celebrities is not a big problem, but the decisive protagonist will always be a soulless puppet, which is no fun at all.

So far it's not bad, but when the protagonist is invincible, don't waste so much time on Frieza. Just cripple Frieza and let him transform into his strongest form and continue to torture him. Also, I hope you don't create any clones. If you need subordinates, you can consider using the mouse to turn silence into movement or the black shadow army. Then it seems that Daolong can give its subordinates black energy to make them stronger quickly, right? Then shouldn't the protagonist do the same? And after finishing the plot, it seems that the most outrageous thing among Jackie Chan's Adventures is probably the History of Time, right?

Dragon Ball is too long-winded. Since you are going to break your skin at the beginning, don't write anything about waiting. Just start it and think about it so much. It's so cool. If you write it directly and start it, I will feel very happy. The protagonist is decisive and the character is established immediately. As a result, if you ask for a few words, the character of the protagonist who is just a good-for-nothing son-in-law is completely unattractive.

Full level concept version? I don't think so. I didn't write it out when I saw it in the introduction.

Say something for the author First of all, let's not talk about whether celebrities are poisonous. Even if they are poisonous, the number of appearances is only three times, right? Called once, loaded the bases once, and brought it up once At most, this can be said to be that the author is an LSP, so what kind of problem is that? Secondly, talk about how dirty celebrities are. . . Other authors have patched themselves up and instead of yyating what they looked like when they were young, they insist on yying what they experienced in their thirties and forties. Can this be considered the author's problem? Furthermore, when it comes to something that has just been mentioned, don't you think it's a bit unreasonable to have to worry about lsp and use celebrities to vent it? I wouldn't like it if you said that the author wrote about celebrities in four or five of the ten chapters, but it seems that he only mentioned it in two or three sentences in the tenth chapter, and then killed it with one stroke. Don't be too outrageous. .