Anime Crossover: As the Demon Lord, I Meet Kamishiro Rize from the Start

This book uses Kamishiro Rise as a gimmick. It must be collected by Kamishiro Rise, and it must be collected everywhere. The author is a harem party. Regarding the situation of Kamishiro Rise, benevolent people have different opinions. I can't make everyone like it. I can only say that I try to write it well and not touch the poisonous points of readers. If you have any good opinions, you can put forward them. After all, readers are my customers, and customers are God. Long live

There is a problem with the setting of the strength of the pig's feet. The eight demons in the original work are not expressive enough because the power of the world can only be expressed to this extent. The setting of the eight demons is at a conceptual level. It can be said that in the complete state, except for their obvious weaknesses, they are invincible. And with immortality, their weaknesses can only be overcome to the point of being sealed. However, now the author has written them like little Yakuza, and everyone looks down on them and wants to step on them.

The more I write, the worse it becomes. It is just a pseudo-invincible article dressed in the clothes of the Holy Lord. Later on, anyone can step on the protagonist's feet, which is quite exciting for readers. Not pleasant at all.

Dude, it's okay to accept Kamidao Riyo, but don't describe how she used to hunt people. You either don't let Kamidai Riyo eat people in the first place, or you try to downplay the fact that she has eaten people. Why do you still emphasize it, and then the protagonist directly gives it to you? Don't you think you should do it?

Not bad, I hope to receive them all, no takeovers

With your background, you don't have the strength of a ghoul or a ghost to be a sewer rat, but you can still eat people on the street? It's a bit of a loss.

Hurry up and change the character of the male protagonist. There is no real character at all. He has the style of a male protagonist in an Asahi Japanese comic. He has the name of the Holy Lord. As a result, he goes to school every day and goes to deal with monsters and people arresting people. It turns out that it is real. Let's take a look at the Holy Lord in the original work. What are you doing? Even if your body is sealed, you can still confuse the international gangs and summon the Black Shadow Corps to disrupt the whole world. Once the seal is unsealed, you will open the gate of hell and recruit your own evil dragon servants to bring the whole world under your command again. And what you wrote This holy master is so pure that he has all the power, but in the end he took over the monster group, took in a woman, and even complained about it. He also pretended to be a pig and eat the tiger. What year is it today? Even Xiao Feng will look down on this holy master you wrote. Once the curse blue comes out Seeing that the Holy Lord has become like this, I'm afraid he didn't directly work with China and the Soviet Union to do it for you. Curse Lan and Zhongsu didn't like the Holy Lord very much. What's wrong is that except for Xiao Feng, none of the other six devils like the Holy Lord. Now they look down on the Holy Lord even more.

If you don't know how to write, let your son Xiaolong come. They are all better than you.

I think you should change it to the Holy Lord template. I don't see any of the Holy Lord character in you.

The more I watched, the more frustrated I became. I might as well just let the soul of the Holy Lord devour the memory of this time traveler. A demon who could compete with the Eight Immortals in ancient times, and whose strength was at least the level of a true immortal, is now playing house with the little monsters from his childhood.