The Outcast: I Fuse with Kaido and Shock the Old Celestial Master!
一人：融合凯多，震惊老天师！
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 3.6M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
2.5kChapters
9.5MReads
10.8kFlowers
8.7Score
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If you are submissive, you should change your strength to someone else. This protagonist is simply not worthy of Kaido-sensei's strength. He smiles bitterly when he doesn't mean anything, and smiles bitterly at every turn. Teacher Kaido's power is stronger than the power of the people of the motherland. There is no soul mace. One stick. Your name is Zhang Chulan, you are called Feng Baobao, you are called Laotianshi, and you are Guofang.
This Kaido is written like a sissy
Why is the word "Fengshayan" written like "Shabi"? He will fight against the protagonist, and he has no IQ at all, right?
At the beginning, when the protagonist was training, he only had 30 kilograms in his hand. Any supporting character would be fine, right? Don't talk about Kaido,,,,,
Author, you don't want to accept Xia He, do you still want to lick the protagonist after you just fucked Lu Liang? , Don't you think it's dirty? You want a cuckold?
It's better to say that he directly obtained Kaido's power. Fusion with Kaido? But he doesn't have any of Kaido's usual body shape. It made me all confused.
I don't know how many chapters you have seen Anyway, after I read the comments, I knew that they were destined to be poorly written. Xia He, a disciple of the old Heavenly Master and the wife of Zhang Lingyu, was made a slave? Are you a villain? If he is a villain, but he is also a temporary worker, is this nonsense? The truth is not thorough, but the truth is counter-intuitive. Why don't you write one? That's the fact I saw flowers and rewards. It's over a million words, and that's it. Sure enough, it's not very well written.
Not a Kaido template? What is the Eye of Heaven? . .
What kind of shit is the protagonist written? The protagonist is like a green tea icon. He knows that Feng Baobao will be attacked and does nothing. Moreover, Feng Baobao is a friend of all kinds, but the protagonist is like this to his friends? This 8.3 Score is well deserved. After all, everyone knows about Feilu's score. How bad is an 8 score?
**Damn it, the second one**, Xia He wrote it like this. I originally wanted to come out and take a bite out of you, a bad writer, but it turns out it's not a harem, but it's not a harem, you poisoned me,**