Wuxia Crossover: I Choose Xiaolongnu, So Why Are You Crying?

How can Linghu Chong be a normal person when he plays with the Flower Picking Thief?

There is a serious logic bug at the beginning. How did the protagonist escape from Shi Feixuan and Wanwan without knowing martial arts? Isn't it outrageous that he could escape for so long? . .

It's a pity. The writing was originally good, but the male protagonist insists on befriending Linghu Chong, which is ridiculous. I warned you a long time ago, but you didn't listen. The dragon knight in the parallel world has not defiled the little dragon girl, so what if he hasn't done it? Does it prevent readers from traveling through time and being the first to kill him? There are so many people to make friends with, but you have to make friends with Linghu Chong, who is a good brother to the flower picker!? What if Linghu Chong in the parallel world didn't make friends with the flower picker? Readers are just disgusted with him. The more he reminds him, the more he writes like this. He is so self-righteous. He can't afford the big king with just enough money, so go out on the street.

I always feel that you take the protagonist too seriously, and you also think that the Yinkui sect and Cihang Jingzhai are too awesome. You just see all the shit on them. People from all over the world come to kill the protagonist. Anyone who can't be beaten can come out and jump. Zuo Lengchan doesn't plan to merge the five mountains? Isn't Yu Canghai looking for the evil sword manual? Even the grandson Gongsun Zhi ran away, what did he do if he didn't have his own business to do? A fatwa for two women has moved the whole world. Does that mean the whole world is being licked by these two? Why are you so capable? Is it possible that someone like Emperor Shakti will come out because of this matter later? The writing is not reasonable at all, and the details cannot stand up to scrutiny. There are errors everywhere after scrutiny.

It's so boring to just live on nonsense for five or six chapters.

The writing is unexpectedly good, but be careful not to step on the trap, find an opportunity to kill Linghu Chong, and make friends with this kind of people. For reference, Xiaofeng gave her beauty to the Snake King, a good friend, and the Snake King changed hands and sent the woman to someone else's bed. And Linghu Chong's brother is Tian Boguang, the flower-picking thief. If there are many women in the novel, don't engage in brotherhood. He only accepts women for daily life, training and killing. Like Wang Yuyan and his daughter, they still invite the moon. I think we should accept them, or make a young version of Wu Mingkong like the female emperor. This can give the female protagonists a stable and safe place, and the male protagonist can also be romantic. My subordinates suggest system output. After all, any martial artist will always have some backstabbers.

Sometimes his surname was Liu, and sometimes his surname was Ye.

Mr. Liu? What's your name? The realm is also written in a mess, Grandmaster Wei Zhuang? Is Li Hanyi in the realm of freedom? , It is only reasonable for Wei Zhuang and Li Hanyi to be in the same realm. For example, Li Hanyi Wei Zhuang Dongfang Bubai Yao Yue and others, Zhang Sanfeng the magician Pang Ban and Wuming Li Chun Gang are at the same level, and Emperor Shi Tianwu Invincible Xiao Sanxiao and the like are at the same level.

There are too many realms. Only the 16th level of Tianmo Kung is innate The Grand Master is only on the 18th floor. The freedom behind that. How to practice Xiaoyao?

After killing the people, the author should have added a sentence: "The common people are confused, the world is in chaos, there are hundreds of schools of thought, but I am the only one who flies to Lu" to show off. Later, perhaps when appearing, you can occasionally add, "The sword is buried in the frost in the small building, looking back at the situation in the rivers and lakes. If you have the talent, you can look up at the clear stream and see the distant stars."