Seafaring: I Assemble the Great Nazarick Crew

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Well, after reading the first 20,000 words, I know why there is no data. The idea is really good, but the writing is too petty. The protagonist is the king. Although you did not explain a small change in the plot before the time travel, he is still the king. In the original work, a guild with all evil people was actually written by you into a good word. An ordinary stranger offended his subordinate but chose to forgive him. There is no doubt about the attributes of the Virgin, and then there is the plot arrangement. I don't know if the author will not write it if it deviates from the trajectory of the original work. Nami and Sanji are both members of the protagonist group. I can understand that you are recruiting girls when you write Nami, but why did Sanji recruit him? A perverted cook, use it to seduce people or let him target the protagonist's harem? There are so many pirate articles that I won't accept him. You, the author, really don't have any consciousness. There are so many NPCs in the Big Tomb. I don't believe that there is not even a cook. I have to write this paragraph to irritate people. It is superfluous. Finally, there is Hawkeye. Your plot is purely following Luffy's route. You may have your own ideas, but my evaluation is boring, extremely boring, nothing new, and a waste of imagination. This kind of writer Lu Zi basically writes one after another. The author should take care of himself.

Come on, I have a good idea. If the writing setting is passable, it should be good.

Commentary on Chapter 7: Nami's Dream in "Voyage: Forming the Nazarick Emperor's Regiment" written by Bai Zhizhi.

Why didn't you travel to the original world? What is the race and profession of the traveler?