Living in Konoha: Starting the Career Change to Hyuga Nianhuang

Damn it, when people read books these days, the protagonist can't bear any grievance. If you scratch your skin a little, you'll be accused of torturing the master. If you open a harem, you'll be accused of licking*. You've been a magician for a long time and you've lost your mental strength.

Brother, are you comparing Arad's combat power with that of Hokage? Arad's combat power is as high as several universes. What's great about you, Hokage, is your star explosion. The universe is not just about stars. The sky is round and the sky is round. You have to understand what this means! So there is no competition at all. If you put it like that, well, I can probably blow up the entire Hokage galaxy in one sleep. In one sleep, I can become an apostle, and an apostle is above the god level.

Just by looking at the introduction, I have to grab every Supreme Bone. Is it better to grab the Chaos Bone?

The book is very good, but would it be okay to change the heroine to something else? I think nine out of ten people I yearn for are Reba.

They have broken the dimensional wall and become pirates. They were trying to crush the game, but they also tried to suppress their strength. Now that they are suppressed, they have to recruit apprentices as nannies. The more they write, the more boring they become.

Don't feel sorry for house elves. Think about why they are slaves. Poor people must be hateful. You are pitying an alien race, just like treating animals as the same species.

After reading a few chapters, the plot and characters are very childish. It is a fic of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty, but the character design of Huan Huan is not even written well. When writing a fic, the biggest fear is that the character will be broken. They have all read the original work. The characters you wrote are very different from the original work, and it is very confusing to read.

To be honest, this one has a devil fruit. It's great to write about spiritual recovery. Build a force. Very awesome. One Emperor, Three Emperors and Seven Kings 108 Generals

Your fucking awesome B put a movie on the shelves and hasn't finished it yet

I found that except for a few books about Hinata's brother, there are basically no books in which the Hyuga protagonist is a member of the clan. They all start with the separation of families. How do you read it? The timeline of the first chapter collapsed directly, which is equivalent to Neji and Kai being in the same class at school. Considering the age of ninjas and the years of war, they are basically children born after the war. There is really little room for manipulation.

Since the appearance of the Covenant Gun, I think it would be better to give the Sekiryuutei to his subordinates! Otherwise, it will really be a waste in the hands of the protagonist! Too bad!

I'm convinced. Why does it make me feel like the protagonist is a loner? Also, these strong men behind the protagonist act as if they are nothing. They are just trying to kill the protagonist if he speaks or shuts up. I'm really speechless??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

The writing style is very good and the content is wonderful. It is a rare good work in the Siheyuan series. I will definitely follow it.

Did the author create his own props? I only know that the electric beads exclusive to Pikachu are also called electric beads, or is there something else?

呵呵哒，果然还是一样的扑街，

The protagonist and Lian Xing have a very good relationship. It's just that the plot progress is too slow and there are no major events. There is no killing and fighting plot. It feels a bit bland. It's the main character and his wife traveling around the mountains and rivers. A bit boring

Hinata Hizashi's son, is that funny? Still the same age as Kakashi's class. According to Hinata Hizashi and Hyuga Hizashi's twin brothers, Hizashi is fifteen years older than Kakashi, and the Jonin will go to school until he is five or six years old. So is Hinata Hizashi the protagonist who is a nine-year-old or a ten-year-old?

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I have to say that the writing is really good

Commentary on Chapter 133: The Season of the First White Snow, written by Fantasy Flower, "The legitimate son of Earl Gambling, I am the only male divine descendant".

This book won't end without writing a few pictures like the previous ones. If that's the case, then this book won't be interesting to read.

You have a great master in your hands, yet you still keep yourself low, you are so awesome, and the military is the most strict about military rules, so why do you want to inform others? Under normal circumstances, shouldn't we just go to the commander's tent and beat the drum to gather the generals? Anyone who doesn't hear the sound of the three-way drum will be killed. You have a grand master who has the power at hand. You are the prince and the commander-in-chief, and you are justified. However, you undermine your dignity by talking nonsense. It's nonsense.

Fortunately, I didn't continue reading. I didn't dare to continue writing. I was criticized for being a mess, right?

What the hell is the call of the Seven Saints?(?д??)

Author, don't you think the protagonist practices too many techniques? There are dozens of books on internal skills plus sword skills, body skills, external skills, and weapon and medicine training. There are only 24 hours in a day. They go out to eat, sleep, and deal with government affairs. The protagonist can practice each skill for less than half an hour every day. Can he master it? The protagonist's talent has been increased to such a high level now, why not combine these skills and deduce them?

Although I just watched it, I have to complain about this, why a lot of the Ten-Tails I watched related to the Ten-Tails are called Dragon Head

Author, you are really nb, ** wrote to ask for leave, it has not been updated yet

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