I Keep a Diary in a Xianxia World, and the Wuxia Crossover World Is Livestreaming It

Don't give us Lin Pingzhi's various adventures and counterattacks again. I'm going to vomit. Come and write about Lin Pingzhi in a mixed martial arts book. He must have the opportunity to become stronger. It makes me disgusted.

The protagonist is really a good-luck boy, a boy who gives away treasures. His favorite thing is to give opportunities to others.

The main character is too weak. The system was almost poisoned and killed while the system was in hand. I've been writing this for a long time and I'm still standing still. Can you write more comfortably? Is it interesting to see the protagonist become the second old devil Han? Fei Lu was written to abuse the protagonist. It was originally invincible and only then was it able to level up quickly. What nonsense are you writing?

Get rid of Han Lao Mo's bottle... They have already completed the cycle of the timeline, and their true form is watching from the future.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I thought that the characters in the comic would only look better if they were included in the dungeon. I skipped all the plot introductions where the protagonist wandered around the mortal world and flirted with girls, because the author was obsessed with the protagonist as soon as he wrote about it.

What the hell, there are plug-ins, it's been put on the shelves and it hasn't been built yet, you're the one who's fooling me, Lese

Does the author think that the inheritance of repelling insects is very rare? He has to make a deal with this woman, and it has to be done in public. If I am Nascent Soul and I want to kill people and seize insects, I will give the other party one year. Isn't it afraid that they will run away? This woman is also very generous and agreed. If it were me, and people believed that in the first meeting, then there must be a conspiracy, and she just scared her away. I want strange insects, but I want life even more.

This kind of novel still has a lot of people urging it to be updated and saying it is well written. I was deceived and I regretted booking all of them directly. Friends behind me, please read my comments before reading the book, so as not to waste time and money. Talents such as Zhang Sanfeng, Pang Ban and others who can break mountains and turn rivers through the combined martial arts of heaven, earth, gods and gods are equivalent to the fourth and fifth levels in the Qi training period. This combat power has collapsed. Moreover, half of the book is about the protagonist explaining the plot of Fan Xiu in various ways.

Has the author read the second part? In fact, Han Li is not an ordinary person... He is actually the reincarnation of Tianzun...

Yan Lingji is very confused. Old Demon Han is not at the first or second level of Qi training. Do you look down on Old Demon Han too much?