Hong Kong Comprehensive: Five Poisons at the Beginning, My East Star Jade Qilin

You're an Eastern star and you don't want to sell fans? Most of Dongxing's sites are in remote areas. Why is it still a big organization like Hongxing? It's because people are fans. The profits of legitimate business are really higher than fans. The Golden Triangle has long been extinct. You don't need to sell in Hong Kong Island, but you can sell to Southeast Asia or Japan and South Korea.

Chapter 1, "Cowardly Navy", the ancestors back then risked their lives. Is this how you describe it? I even doubt that the author has graduated from elementary school.

The age of the thunder movie is wrong. She and the thunder god are twins. They are more than 600 years old, and the thunder and lightning general is only 600 years old.

When dwarf mules fight, the appearance fee is 5,000? What are you writing about?

Don't just make trouble in Hong Kong every day, and don't write about it as if you are doing something upright and making money than selling flour, which doesn't make you feel involved at all.

Don't you need logic when writing novels?

The writing was very good before charging, but after charging, how can we still provide benefits to people who are full of beasts? Holy Mother? If you can't keep writing, don't write hard. After 100 pictures, it will be like a **

Become the strongest master. You are already the only master. If you are not the strongest, who is the strongest?

The male protagonist will possess several women as human beings. Will he possess all the women he picks up? If that is the case, it would be much more interesting. By the way, let's transform Mariina's figure to make her body more perfect. It is best to make her chest bigger. The front of Mariina in the drama is smaller. Here, Mariina is made bigger, so that Mariina will be more perfect.

I actually saw a discussion in Feilu's comment section about whether to kill girls or not. Has Feilu reached this point? Alas╯╰

The main character's name is too funny

Especially in Chapter 10, the overlapping problem between Akashi and the protagonist is clearly exposed. Hongcun commented on the Age of Miracles. Five people including the protagonist, but Akashi did not say,

If it's a harem, please tell me so I can leave right away without wasting time. Why don't you go to heaven if you write about a harem in prison?

The last paragraph of every chapter should be deleted, it's too disturbing.

Peng Jiahe forgets that Guan Moumou is average-looking.

The plot content feels a bit similar to the projection of the heavens

As the title says, I'll save a hundred chapters before reading it.

Write about Jiado and change the ending of the young master.

I have three monthly passes, do you want them? ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ

What is it? It's a mess.

Jiang Tianyang has never been called Mr. Xiao Jiang, and your senior brothers cannot remove the prefix "Toad Laoji". It sounds very weird to listen to the novel.

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What happened again? What happened again? Doesn't it mean stable?

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I read it a little bit, and it's also verbose. I'm a quasi-sage, but I'm still so timid.

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