Honkai: Star Rail: Fantasy Made Real from the Start
星穹铁道：开局幻想具现
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 146k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
74Chapters
2.4MReads
10.8kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 37
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You have stepped on all the things you should not step on on Feilu. First of all, the protagonist is a time traveler, but I don't know the plot. The introduction directly states that the protagonist has never played Mijia games, which means that he does not know the plot. Then why are you traveling to the past? Be a clown? The second point is that it completely surpasses the original plot dialogue text of the game. Can't you write something of your own? You copy the original plot copy of someone else's game. Did you get authorization from others to write a novel about water plots? My answer is only what Doctor Truth said, negative points! Give me gun
Directly overthrow the Great Guardian, and then deny the company's debts. The debts of the previous dynasty must be repaid by this dynasty?
What an ancient writing method, it completely follows the original plot and the original dialogues of the blockbuster. The obsolete old things have been eliminated as soon as possible, so why do we still want to restore them?
When writing a fanfic, you write about the protagonist without knowing the plot. I really don't know if you are just writing for fun without looking at the results. If you write about the protagonist and know the plot, those who like to read fan fiction are your target users. If you write about the protagonist but don't know, isn't it just to eliminate most of the readers who don't like to read about indigenous protagonists on the basis of the original?
If you want to be funny, be funny. If you want to be serious, be serious. It's both nondescript and nondescript. Do you know where you're headed? I take back what I said, only the beginning looks like
The writing style is a bit like a junior high school student, it seems like fast forwarding and skipping
Can the protagonist not accept March 7? They've all been seen
No, forget about the lack of updates. Originally it was for the character of the protagonist in front of you. If you want to see trouble, what's the point if you follow the path of the original text?
Absolutely, after working on it for a long time, it won't be exactly the same as the original ending except Cocolia is alive. The lower city has become?
The first half is quite interesting, but the latest chapters just don't have that good feeling and feel like they're just too cliche.