Genshin Impact: This Harbinger's Style Seems a Little Off

It seems that he wanted to use a very powerful writing technique, but the author was not educated enough and did not use it. Instead, it was a bit nondescript, making people confused and unable to understand what he was writing. To put it simply, every few seconds you watch it, you will have the illusion of "Am I skipping the plot?"

How much do you know about the plot of the author Genshin Impact? Thousands of years ago during the Demon God War, Gan Yu was by Liu Yun's side. As a result, Shen He called her Junior Sister Gan Yu. Shen He's relationship was earlier than Gan Yu's introduction. Aren't you a Yun player?

The sentences are not smooth and the preface does not match the follower.

Does your punctuation cost money? So reluctant to use it? It's so painful to watch

This is the author's first time writing a book. I hope he will make some progress in the future. From the looks of it, it's basically all about basic issues, such as segmentation, punctuation, transitions, etc.

I just want to know, why does the protagonist's name change from one to another?

The plot is so exciting, so uncomfortable

Regarding the chapter review of "Genshin Impact: This Executive's Style Is Not Right" written by the second deaf successor. 7. Friends, the time has come.

First of all, it's not clear whether this is soul penetration or replacement of existence. However, my preference is to replace it, but your expression is not very clear. After all, you said before that it was about merging the memory of the original owner, but then you said that this person fell asleep drunk and woke up like Luo Chen. This description doesn't sound like soul piercing. You should be replacing its existence. The most important thing is, why do you ask the protagonist's male friend to buy Arlecino's black tights just because you're selected? And if you're not selected, he steals a girl's white silk stockings for the protagonist. This is not good, mainly because he is a man, and he really got Arlecino's black stockings. This is very bad.

Commentary on the chapters of "Genshin Impact: The Executor's Painting Style Is Not Right" written by the second deaf successor 1. Traveling through Teyvat, starting with the Executor.