
Voyage: Starting the Shurima Empire
航海:开局编造恕瑞玛帝国
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 209k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Stats
76Chapters
2.1MReads
26.8kFlowers
9.8Score
1.2kRewards
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Don't make any transitions when writing, can't you just write normally? I have to show off my operations, but I can't write well. The plot is a mess here and there. Do you want to make a suspense movie? Let me tell you how it was here and what it was like ten minutes ago. Just like those greedy directors, if they don't have the skills, they'll shoot well, but if they don't have the skills, they still have to show off, which is speechless.
The protagonist's portrayal is not as good as Doflamingo's
I can't listen and don't ask Xtep for homework. I can't get my homework. Tet, tsk, tsk, tsk, tsk, admiration, tete. Brother Dudu, the butterfly flower is hungry. Wait for me to revive him. Resurrect him.
Commentary on Chapter 48: Pillar of Flame, written by Huanxiang Hibernating, "Voyage: Making the Shurima Empire at the Beginning".