Seafaring: From the Start, I Invent the Shurima Empire

What the hell, isn't the protagonist of this genre usually the Emperor Azir? I thought Azir's abilities would be awakened after the protagonist disappears for a while. After reading Chapter 40, you told me that the protagonist is Aatrox?

Until now, no hero has shown any fighting power. It's all nonsense.

Don't make any transitions when writing, can't you just write normally? I have to show off my operations, but I can't write well. The plot is a mess here and there. Do you want to make a suspense movie? Let me tell you how it was here and what it was like ten minutes ago. Just like those greedy directors, if they don't have the skills, they'll shoot well, but if they don't have the skills, they still have to show off, which is speechless.

The protagonist's portrayal is not as good as Doflamingo's

It's such a stupid start! Don't dare to answer to get reward! So the protagonist is always the weak one! This is not a question of strength, but a question of mentality!

I am looking forward to it after more than ten chapters, but I am already a good swimmer after 20 chapters. I put this book down and stopped pursuing it. Exchange books.

I've written about 10 chapters of opening a tomb, and it's time to move on when I get the blood. And it must be pushed forward. No pushing hard corners. . . . You will pay a lot less.

Fairy puppet drama is too strong, don't write the main character as a bunch of love brains

Why do you want Weiwei to say so much? These can be released later, and they don't look like normal people. Everyone can tell that the explanation is specially given to them, which reduces the credibility.

To be honest, the beginning is very good. I originally thought I could compare it with Yi Qiyan from the Ninja World, but I found that I was wrong. There are so many scenes, do you have to catch one and try hard?