Taking Stock of the Darkening of Childhood Protagonists: Taichi Yagami at the Beginning

Does a darkening Taiyi need to write 1.2 Hundred chapters? Will you be able to finish writing about all the worlds when you are old? Still a half-way eunuch

I don't care, I want to watch Nobita Kami

To watch the fire scales turn black, the protagonist is so miserable. Except for a highlight at the beginning, he gets beaten every day.

It's almost enough to write about the Mi family. Wouldn't it be strange to become a super god?

Even Poseidon is not as good as you, and your writing skills are poor. It's a shame that you can write this novel.

From the moment I took stock of the light curtain and prayed to Taiyi not to turn evil and cause trouble, I knew I couldn't read this book.

The character is seriously OOC. If you want to show the power of the Digimon, you can actually mark it directly in the inventory. There is no need to let characters from other worldviews explain it, as this is simply inconsistent with their character designs.

I have no problem with you spending more space describing the original plot. Judging from the current plot, it is indeed interesting. But since you have decided to write it in the form of a comparative inventory article, can you retain the characteristics and excitement of the inventory article? Especially this kind of darkening contrast, the contrast between the plot of the original world line and the actions of the characters is one of the most important points to watch. You have devoted all your energy to describing the darkening world, but you really only mentioned the situation in the original world? Especially when you use the narration of the article to describe all the problems of people like Ah He, instead of listing them out, it's outrageous! Those viewers still don't know what the children in the original world line have experienced, nor do they know how EX they are, so they all went to watch the blackened Taiyi pretend to be a b. Isn't one of the important points of the blackened comparison text the audience commenting on the NC plots in the original plot and letting them break the defense? It's like taking stock of the darkened Naruto. The audience only sees that the darkened Naruto's father is the Fourth Hokage, the Crown Prince of Konoha, the Kyuubi in his left hand and the right hand, and all kinds of tricks, punches, kicks, and kicks in the Four Ninja Village. It's quite pretentious, but if there is no original tragic experience of Naruto in Konoha since he was a child, and so many NC things done by Konoha's top management, would it still be so exciting? You almost didn't even mention the plot of Digit One in your inventory. You just mentioned it in a few sentences and ended it. Every time it was time to compare, only the members of the protagonist group who had experienced the plot recalled and reacted. So what the heck are you comparing?

Author, you've been going dark for too long. You should write something else.

Facepalm, author, do you still remember how I replied to everyone in the first comment, saying that in reality, I am married and have to support a family, so I won't have sex this time.

I'm really convinced. If it weren't for Nobita Nobita on it, I would have withdrawn earlier, but the first world video wasn't even finished before it was released. It's awesome.

Author, forget it Taichi, Huo Linfei doesn't have the conditions to become a black man. Not to mention Huo Linfei, Nobita doesn't have the conditions to become a black man. Doraemon is just for food. This is a very cool opening male protagonist. The reason why it is like that is purely Nobita's own problem. Maybe he likes it like this.

Good guy, Jesmon is so strong, what about Jesmon X and Jesmon GX? And what do you say about NEO, the god above all gods who transcends all things that cannot be surpassed?

Above the ruins of Konoha. In front of the remains of Tiandao Payne. Uzumaki Naruto ignored the guy who had just claimed to be a god, but was beaten to death by the man not far away who was covered in bloody steam, with a stiff smile on his lips. "Senior Brother Nagato, come to think of it, your pain will be inherited by me from today on." The body slowly rose, and a dark sphere quickly began to condense from his hand. "Feel the pain, experience the pain, accept the pain, and understand the pain. The big spiral... Rinyu!" The black sphere fell from mid-air, leaving only the horrified expressions in Konoha Village!

Can Ah Fei and Nobita really be written about?

To be honest, regarding the two subjects of inventory and comparison, I went from curiosity to boredom to disgust, especially when Feilu took the inventory and dominated the Siheyuan list. So much so that I wouldn't have read this book if I wasn't in a book famine, even when there was really no book on my bookshelf after I restocked it three times. There are two main points of my distaste. First, the choice is wrong. Those who read the fanfic have a certain understanding of the original work. Those who don't know can also learn about it through the speed version after short video editing. It is faster and more profitable than watching an inventory and comparison. And those who haven't seen it won't have much impression on your comparison. Second, it's too watery. Normal fanfics are all brand new stories, and there are still many places to fill in the gaps. What is the situation of inventory comparison? Copy one copy of the original work, and exclaim with emotion in the comment section. The remaining one-third is the kind of normal fan. The content of a normal fan's five or six chapters can be compared to twenty or thirty chapters.

The author should not be short and feeble

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