Seafaring: A Hundredfold Power-Up and Winning Nami’s Heart

Let's complain about the introduction. Luffy defeated a Celestial Dragon and obtained the Empress and the Island of Nine Snakes. The protagonist has to destroy the Celestial Dragon's Holy Land to obtain the Empress and the Island of Nine Snakes. Well, who is the protagonist? Luffy: I am the protagonist, hahahaha

Is the East China Sea considered barren? This place should be the most peaceful place in the world, right? Stability means prosperity, no matter how you look at it, it cannot be barren, right? And a guy like Colonel Mouse would want to be transferred out of the East China Sea? He doesn't know how comfortable it is to stay in the East China Sea. There are few pirates and the Emperor Tiangao has no restrictions. He is almost equal to the Earth Emperor. Will he think about being transferred from the East China Sea to other more dangerous seas? Going to the Grand Line is even more impossible.

If the protagonist is not so strong, why would he leave his woman on the island? It is clearly written that the invincible and crushing Shuang Wenliu must create an image that seems to be unable to protect too many of its own women. They will stay outside and fight against the world conquest. All the protagonist's women outside will be captured and used as slaves by the Celestial Dragons, and the protagonist will be given a lot of cuckolds.

You can't be normal when chasing girls. You have to force them. What's the difference between this and a rapist? It's no better than a Celestial Dragon.

Even if you patch things up with Nuo Qigao later, it won't change the fact that you are Zhi Z!

Why did you leave Nokigao behind?????? There is also the world of pirates, where adventurers are almost non-existent. He has the strength to go to sea, but as long as he doesn't listen to the World Government, he will definitely become a pirate. Could the protagonist be the leader of the world government? Impossible! If you become a pirate and the threat is high, CP agents will come to investigate you and find your weaknesses. Is it possible that the protagonist is not dangerous? Impossible! You are too optimistic about the bottom line of this pirate world and the world government! People have no bottom line

Keya feels that the writing here is a bit bad and does not fit the character. Based on her character, do you think she will be so impatient to let the protagonist kill Crowe before she understands Crowe's true identity and true intentions? The writing of this paragraph is flawed, and in the beginning, I swore to believe in Crowe, but later when I saw Crowe showing his strength, I immediately betrayed him and said I would kill him? It's too abrupt. It's barely reasonable to at least give her a reaction time and a point of anger, such as telling her the truth about the death of her parents, but I feel that even if this is the case, her emotion should only be sadness over anger, and she won't yell or kill Crowe. This kind of character cannot do this kind of thing. At best, she will acquiesce. I suggest that when the author writes, the plot should be as consistent as possible with the characters. No matter how brilliant it is, at least it should not seem inconsistent.

Lieutenant General, Smoker? Seriously? Isn't this before the plot begins?

Don't forget the famous sword in Rogge Town. You can use it but you can't live without it.

If you don't have a large-scale AOE to harm the world government, it won't be afraid of you.