Urban Drama: More Children, More Blessings, Winning Over Xia Xue from the Start

He walked away. He had promised to fire up Xia Xue at the beginning, but ended up having sex with two old women. He really couldn't stand it anymore. If you like it, go see it yourself, don't come and talk to me. I just expressed my personal thoughts and did not report anything. It does not affect your continued progress.

There won't be another Gouba Aunt Song Qian, right? Do you like second-hand broken orchid so much?

To be honest, when I read your book, I felt a little bloated and uncomfortable. I don't know if it's because of anger or something. Let me give you a piece of advice. It's fine to write mindless cool stories. If people don't like them, they'll just leave. But why do you insist on putting shit in mindless cool stories? I won't talk about the first point, Jiang Lai. That's my personal opinion. The second point is that the protagonist, a man who has lived two lifetimes to cultivate immortality, competes with Qian Sanyi??? Where is your brain? Brother, you can't do this without a brain, and judging from what you wrote, I guess you still have the money to add trouble to the protagonist in the plot. It's just like the plot of Ni Maluo, and Wang Zhifeng. You already know what kind of person he is. Do you still remember to ask the heroine to follow him? What's wrong, brother, do you have chlorosis? And why why do you have to let the heroine be drugged??????????????? The more you talk, the more you get angrier. Brother, why don't you add a penguin? I want to call you and spray you.

The heroine jumped off the building because of her money, and you just let it go?

It doesn't match the title of the book. It starts with Xia Xue, and a classic aunt is introduced soon. As a result, I later went to have sex with an aunt who was in her forties or fifties. The content is roughly like this. How to say it? The taste is quite strong.

Qian Sanyi's pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot made my cerebellum shrink. You can write such a smart plot. A protagonist who cultivates immortality is competing with a three-year-old child like Ni Me. Isn't he a big brother? Have you just graduated from elementary school????

It's this kind of plot again. Every time a home run is hit, it's either an accident or an accident. This kind of book is super cool. 88

How many chapters have you read, Cultivation to Immortality?? This cliché plot

Why do you have to mention that the protagonist returned to the uterus?? Do you have any special hobbies? Wouldn't it be better to just ignore it? Or that the womb is very warm. Let the protagonist linger?

Adding Jiang Lai into the mix is ​​really a failure. Seeing this kind of woman makes me want to vomit.