For Retirement, I Choose Teyvat
退休就选提瓦特
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 102k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
48Chapters
1.7MReads
4.4kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 9
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As a new author, I found that writing is much more difficult than I thought. Although I have some ideas in my mind, it is really not easy to translate them into words. Sometimes even after I write it and read it, I feel a little awkward, and it is different from the emotion I want to express. I also clearly knew that my book had various problems, and I was prepared to be criticized. However, I found that I might have thought too much, and that I was not very popular and did not deserve criticism. I won't comment on normal comments, and I'm willing to accept normal criticism, but if it's unwarranted abuse and malicious attacks, I'll reject it. Anyway, thank you to everyone who has already left a message, or who will leave a message in the future. You all are motivation for newbies to keep writing.
It was quite uncomfortable to read at the beginning. The format of the first few chapters and the inexplicable plot of Chapters 9 and 10 almost put me off. However, the theme of this invincible and relaxed store opening story was very suitable for me. Plus, I am also an old father of Keli, so I wanted to continue reading. I felt that the plot got better in the later chapters. I read dozens of chapters before I knew it. It was pretty good, but I couldn't accept the part about taking a bath with Wendy. Maybe it's because I'm from the south? When I was a kid, we didn't share bathing facilities in the school dormitory, so I couldn't accept it.
God loves the world, does the god of Xiling Empire count?
What is going on in Chapter 9/10/22? . . ???
If you want to play Nantong, my brother won't accompany you.
Commentary on Chapter 0009 Fantasy Simulated Battle (Part 1) of "Choose Teyvat when Retiring" written by Mo Ranfu Hua.
Commentary on Chapter 0001: The Retired Savior of "Choose Teyvat when Retiring" written by Mo Ran Fu Hua.
Commentary on Chapter 0026 Kallen's Interview and Living Together in "Choose Teyvat when Retiring" written by Mo Ranfu Hua.
Commentary on Chapter 0025: Turns out to be Kallen in "Choose Teyvat when Retiring" written by Mo Ran Fu Hua.