Keeping a Diary in the Martial Arts Multiverse, I Change Every Goddess's Fate

What a mess, you said exposing the original plot and letting the beauty escape the tragedy, but in the end, the incident was simplified to the extreme, and the people involved looked confused after reading it. For example, Qiao Feng and A'Zhu, there was a sentence about the person who loved each other died in the arms! Brother, tell me, just these few words, how do you ask the person involved to avoid them?! If you don't mention anything, who can know what you mean!

It looked fine at first, but immediately after Mu Wanqing came out it was bad. Do you like green so much? First of all, there is a plot where the brothers and sisters drink medicine and stay together in Wanqiu Valley. It seemed that Duan Yu was still holding Mu Wanqing when he brought him back? Secondly, to marry Mu Wanqing, you still need to visit Duan Zhengchun? Is he qualified? Also give me the Great Return Pill? Is he qualified? Just give it to Qin Hongmian. It would be nice if he didn't take all the beautiful Tianlong women away and worship him. Is it possible that in the future, the protagonist Xu Weixiong will visit Xu Xiao and his son to kill their thugs in the future? Even if you don't marry, you won't get close to such a prostitute. The writing in the diary is weird. If it weren't for the good evaluation of the characters, this book would be unreadable. The martial arts skills are a bit lame. The upper limit of Nine Yin and Nine Yang is so high these days.

Kong Ci, are you serious? To be honest, I don't feel much. A vase who doesn't even have a self, even the newly revised G-licking Wang Yuyan is better than her.

You really don't have a choice, Kang Min has it all.

It's really messy. I think we'll have eunuchs soon.

It's so boring. It's another third-rate novel. It makes me speechless. Isn't it invincible that I can't write it? You are invincible at the beginning, but later on you read your diary and flirt with girls? Without growth, without becoming a strong person, I have changed my mentality and will. I always want to reach the sky in one step.

A lot of crap. . In particular, the reborn person is even more of a failure, telling everyone how much of a wretched waste the protagonist will be in the future.

An aboveboard nonsense novel

I suggest you change it! Among the diary series of mixed martial arts novels, this one is not good. The writing is too verbose, and the character evaluation... Anyway, I don't agree with it, and I don't know how other readers feel. In addition, the start seems to be single player all the time

Comments on Chapter 5: The Young Lady's Rewards written by Greedy Lang, "A Man Keeps a Diary in Zongwu, and the Goddess Changes His Life".