Konoha: After the Diary Was Exposed, the Kunoichi Collapsed

Playing LOL and playing Infernal Affairs? With such a strong EDG, why not just bring him back to the team? Playing as an undercover agent of *Mar, is it fun to help the stick reach the top? Reality is fucked up, so why do novels do this kind of thing?

How can I put it, the diary stream has an old problem, the collapse of various characters, the crazy and mindless licking of the female characters, and the various despicable and vulgar ways of the male characters. In fact, if the character design is not ruined, the diary flow can be very interesting. To give you an example, Kurenai Yuhi is a high-spirited and cold-hearted lady. It is impossible for her to start cheating because of a few words in the diary, and then become extremely disgusted with Asuma because of these few words. Then Asuma's character also collapsed. Asuma's character is not that bad. He ran away to become a guardian nin because he couldn't stand the third generation's behavior. If he saw Kurenai Yuhi falling in love with someone else, he would only offer blessings and not stalk her. A person who could invite a student to dinner, empty his wallet and not have enough money to pay the bill, and then kneel down to apologize to the shop owner, couldn't possibly be that bad. As for Yuhi Kurenai getting pregnant before marriage and not holding a wedding, I can only say that she never expected that an elite jounin would die so suddenly. Isn't her pre-marital behavior normal?

It's another story about saying that the heroine is too young to start with. Come on, this excuse is really lame, okay? 16 Years old is still young. According to you, the other heroines are only in high school and underage. Do you also want to be Liu Xiahui? It will take several years until they reach adulthood. Will you continue to be a eunuch during this period? How many chapters do you think you needed to write in the book over the past few years? Becoming a eunuch again?

I was speechless when I saw this introduction, and I would not wait for the guests to leave before catching up.

To be honest, when I was watching Naruto in college, Jiraiya didn't make me feel so majestic and lofty. The first half of my life can be said to be hard work, but the second half of my life gave me the feeling of escaping. After so many years, I found the child of destiny and became a great writer. As for peeping, I won't talk about it, although it is for the sake of humor. But giving him a heroic death in the end felt like a deliberate sublimation. Maybe it's because when you get older and watch these, you'll think for yourself, think more, and don't have the innocence you had when you were a child.

Not! There are only three episodes of Kiriyama Five Elements! You will know the four abilities of the other four Kiriyamas. Don't you want to do it?

After millions of years, is there still the strength of the Supreme Being on the other side? ? Or the strength of the Immortal King in a perfect world?

Can LV5 run away with fully leveled frozen fruit?

Jianjigu? Come and see mine

This book cannot be broken down. It is essentially an unlimited flow of anime, film and television fan fiction, and the style is also good. The only shortcoming is that the plot has been changed too much. The tragedy is impressive, so it would be better if those women were written off. Don't even write about the heroine, why write about the heroine? There are so many female protagonists in that great book. In reality, they are all monogamous, so don't write about female protagonists. How's the skewers?

Pull down the arrogant little Kaguya-hime

At first glance, you can tell that this is a piece of writing written by a sperm, a piece of writing written by a sperm without any brain.

After reading so many diary novels, I can sum it up in one sentence: the diary is obscene and narcissistic, and the female characters in the diary always call them wives when they see them. When it comes to reality, he pretends to be serious and gets angry with all the female characters, looking like a gentleman. Then when a female character takes the initiative, the male protagonist is either a eunuch or impotent. To put it bluntly, he is a loser.

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You might as well be reborn from the future if you are riding a horse. The gods will self-destruct in the beginning and travel through time, treating other people as fools.

There is a bug. If the protagonist is not unique, then the protagonists that the protagonist encounters when traveling through time are also systematic.

There are too many descriptions of the psychological activities of the supporting characters. Don't write in such detail the psychological activities that can be mentioned in one sentence.

I felt relieved when I saw that all the book reviews were scolding me.

Now there are still people pretending to be pigs and eating tigers** they vomited

Author, when you were writing this book, didn't you feel a sense of embarrassment surrounding you? Or are you usually so obscene in private? The biggest flaw of this book is the diary, but you write it like a human being. I don't think a normal woman would fall in love with someone who calls her wife in the diary, goes crazy from time to time, and fights when she meets a suitor. Also, your character Asma is too different from the original book, right? Is Asuma the character of the second ancestor?

I am holding back a few chapters like I am constipated. I advise you to read more when I am not thinking, so that I will keep reading. I don't like to chase books. I will delete them when one day I suddenly feel uncomfortable with them.

Does the protagonist have a real harem? ? Or is it the harem label that attracts the popular protagonist, the impotent eunuch Diamond Straight?

They all said that they would inherit everything from Hashirama. Isn't this a casual hit? If you learn this magic, you will be invincible.

No need to say, the diary questions are interesting, but can you not let the male protagonist know that the female protagonist can see the content? Can you write a diary and call everyone your wife? Don't you feel ashamed? If you call your name normally, more people might see it. If you need to flirt, just flirt. Why are you pretending to be serious? Is it any wonder that men like women?

A gold bar at the beginning is worth 10 points. One hundred points lottery. Draw a nuclear submarine. . The second chapter talks about a nuclear submarine exchanged for one hundred gold bars. . I don't have enough brains to write a novel. .

The protagonist is a eunuch

Not bad. It seems to be the best one I have ever seen in the Naruto Diary genre.

What kind of random fantasy plot are you writing?

The development of the plot is a bit slow. Just like the contractor, it takes seven or eight chapters to solve something that can be solved in two or three chapters. You have to know that what you are writing is a comprehensive urban drama, not a single drama. There is no need to write in such detail. There are many places that can be covered in one go, but it takes one or two chapters to explain, solve, etc., Which is too long. . . .

Not even the taxi driver or the seafood boss?