Honkai: Star Rail: A Girlfriend for Hire, Bringing Firefly Home for New Year

So far it's not bad, but it has the style of a cover-up urban novel. We can follow the trend, but the start has been optimized, and rental houses are full of elements. Don't let a young man or a gangster come in after that, or it will really break. We can either write a story about pure love with a single heroine, who can live a peaceful life without any distractions, or we can write a story about a harem with some superpowers.

Are you writing about pregnancy so early? How to write the plot of the child later? This is not a Lord of Many Children and Many Blessings article. . .

I'm a bit afraid to read it. This is the fifth book. Except for the Silver Wolf, the first four have not survived. *It goes without saying that God is a person, it seems like it's hard to tell the priority. In Bronya's book, there are all kinds of things like pretending to be sexy and getting slapped in the face, parents recognizing their daughter-in-law but not their son, what they dare to do or not, and so on. It is full of poisonous points. The perfect negative teaching material. Although there were some poisonous points in Silver Wolf's book, they have all been changed. At present, except for the few changes, it is quite normal. It can be said that the rhythm of daily writing has been grasped. The most annoying thing is the one by Liu Ying (not yours), the one by T. M., They even put food in their mouths and they seemed drunk. It's all about everyday writing, so you can skip the part about pretending to be a pig. It's not a youth romantic comedy, and it doesn't end with a confession. This is YY's peach story, and I think it's unreasonable if the main character doesn't have Jin Dio. There are definitely people in the comments who want a female protagonist. Why don't you go to the moderator to find pure love?

Our primary goal should be to solve Liu Ying's anentropy syndrome, right?

Liuying is false, and the pioneers are also fantasy characters. But you, my friend Roasted Chicken, are you realistic? Don't let me meet you in reality. Roasted Chicken, you have no heart and you deserve to die.

Chapters 73 and 78 have been written and recommended. Thank you everyone for your suggestions! I have learned and improved in time!

I think we can give the protagonist a star core

Everything else is good, but the uncle is too heavy on literature, and he is both a girl and a girl.

Clam? Liuying? Loli? With Liu Ying's height, you tell me she's a loli?!

Why do you escort writers, including the supporting characters and parents, not care about the heroine's real name? Do the supporting characters really think that the surname of Liu Ying is Ying Ying?