Siheyuan: the Doting Wife He Yuyu Makes Qin Huairu Mad

Personally, I think the Demon King of the Slime World is on the same level as the Seven Gods. Rock God may be stronger than the Demon King, but he is still weak. When the Demon King is awakened, he is stronger than the Seven Gods, excluding the cheaters. At least the maintainer level to the Tianli level combat power. Milim's cheaters are not comparable to Teyvat.

What are you writing about? Qin Huairu is a smart man, the best among the best! At that time, anyone who dared to do this would be directly accused of following the feudal line and trying to undermine the construction of New China. They were subject to target practice, and whoever clung to them would die.

There's so much bullshit, it's a problem that can be solved by calling the police

If you write like this, it will appear that the protagonist is mentally retarded. Isn't it easy to make money? Wouldn't it be nice to be the master of two worlds? Even if you don't cooperate with the country, won't the money come quickly if you sell antiques? As a modern person who travels back in time, you have to look at the faces of the people in the courtyard, consider their thoughts, and help others. Are you a toxic brother? Can't the protagonist take off with He Yuyu alone? ?

Being an amateur feels illogical. Even if you are a newcomer or an Internet celebrity, it is more reasonable. If you are an amateur, how will others know you and invite you to a variety show? You must have a bit of fame before others know you are a person. Of course, if you have a big background, pretend that I didn't say it. It feels a bit poisonous to appear on a variety show as a pure amateur.

The plot progresses too slowly, and there are no highlights except for the overlap of space. The trust between each other is too weak. How can you attract readers like this? So my feeling is that this book is useless, eunuch.

Protagonist**? It was said in that era that women held up half the sky. Don't you know how to call the police on the street?

Is this something a human being can write? Doubt your race

It's a bit **, if you want to kill decisively, then the writing will be bad. If you want to live a stable life, then write better, but it has the disadvantage. You fight back and forth about something, but if you do this, the writing will be boring.

Please update it faster. Also, the combat power needs to be carefully considered before writing. Probably tens of thousands is enough for the protagonist at the beginning, and around 100,000 can be played later. If you want to travel to another time, you can add it the most.

I've read several books of The Walking Dead. Giving away girls and killing them is the norm. I don't know what this one will be like.

Hehe, you can write, keep it up

Chapter 1: Dreams and Reality Chapter Commentary on the book "Siheyuan: He Yuyu's Doting Wife and Mad Qin Huairu" about eating chicken feathers in exchange for sweets.

Commentary on Chapter 19: Cutting off Hu Yilin, Hengshan Favors in "Zongwu: Combining Lin Yuantu at the Beginning and Killing Through Jianghu" written by Yangcun Manyangyang.

Commentary on chapter 33: Trouble is coming in the book "Siheyuan: He Yuyu's Doting Wife and Mad Qin Huairu" about eating chicken feathers in exchange for sweets.