Creepy Honkai: Star Rail: I'm Kept by a Yandere

What you want to see is the protagonist, not all kinds of childish mockery. Shouldn't your focus be on the interaction between the yandere character and the protagonist? It's hard not to suspect that this is a bunch of ridicule that is just a joke about the word count.

Author, let me tell you the truth, if this is the case, and you can still wait until it is on the shelf to collect girls, then don't think about your book being long. It would be better if you don't write the part about the black tower. If you write it, it will appear that the protagonist's lower body is weak and his penis is in his belly. Little toys are rarely written about in Feilu. Even if they are written, it is still a light touch, not to cover up one's penis. So be it. In fact, after reading it, your writing style is not enough to support you to write a long story. You should sharpen your writing skills.

I knew you wanted to give it to Ruan Mei for the first time, so I couldn't bear to choose the one directly on the Black Tower. I am not qualified to be picky in Chapter **. But you shouldn't write that Black Tower No. 20 Was knocked unconscious during a meeting. What's the difference between writing like this and your girlfriend being played with a toy to perfection in front of everyone? This is the real poisonous point.

The writing is too deliberate, and I feel that without the protagonist, the Dragon Kingdom in this world is really not as good as a small book. I am not bragging about the other party. I hate mindless talk and belittling. I feel that if the protagonist does not enter the game, the Dragon Kingdom will not have any allies in this world. Is the setting like this still a Dragon Kingdom? Moreover, the first dungeon, the strongest veteran player in China, was not as good as Xiao Benzi. He ran away without thinking, carrying the protagonist on his back. The problem was that he knew there was not enough time to die together. In order to highlight whether the protagonist could fight back or to highlight the incompatibility of friendship. I would like to state here that it is not that I don't recognize this relationship, and TV dramas always have dialogues about you leaving quickly and I won't leave, so I ended the show. Knowing that the Black Tower is weird and terrifying, you still dare to identify it. Secondly, the audience barrages are either traitors or immigrants. Not to mention mindlessly supporting one's own country, but it is okay to insist on encouraging one's own country. The world background of Dragon Kingdom is too deliberate just to highlight the protagonist. If I didn't wear it, my grades would always be at the bottom. Speechless Is there no one available in the plot of National Fortune and Dragon Kingdom?

I feel weird. Black Tower is not necessarily weaker than Ruan Mei, right? Even if you can't defeat it, it won't be completely destroyed. Oh, you said it's okay if it's a puppet, but it's so important that the black tower doesn't have to fight with all its strength? Just use puppets? That's not quite right, right?

It's best to write less about ridicule and the like, and less about the real world, and more about the main story, otherwise fewer people will watch it.

Hey, he is actually the author of Dian Lao. How cool.

Ah, these 60-odd pictures are at most as good as a dozen pictures.

I don't understand. As long as there are no people or weapons capable of producing nuclear bombs, what can they do? If they are forced to release the nuclear bomb, everyone in the world will die together.

. . . The protagonist is always taking drugs, and I always feel that the protagonist is a wimp.