Konoha: Start the Tenseigan, Take over Team 7

During the growth period, I fought with a bunch of complete players. . In its growth stage, Lucemon can fight a bunch of Ultimates, forcibly ending the war between human and animal forms. Although it is stretched in the later stage, Lucemon is indeed the ceiling combat power in the growth period. The protagonist is the Michael template, but Lucemon is the template of Jesus, the Son of God, and the fallen form is the template of Satan. I am afraid you have to call him the master, laugh to death.

The start is shocking. I had 6 levels of abilities when I was a child. Why not unify the world directly? Still doing the mission? Pawn for others? It's not about money. I said the paper I used to shit on is worth 100 million. Who can object?

The author is, a stammerer, why do you always keep picking commas before finishing a sentence? I, really don't understand, why do you like to pick commas so much?

If you choose one of the three abilities of all realms, why don't you just choose a Zanpakutō and directly see the Eye of Jigu?

I was really impressed. I saw a one two days ago that was similar to this one, except that the sister was Zhuge Dali and the girlfriend was Rose.

Does anyone recommend the same thing: Thank you for inviting me to become the God of Destruction in Dragon Ball, and to beat up the God of Destruction in the beginning of Dragon Ball.

You are so weak with your sword like fire.

The beginning of the Magic Forbidden is difficult to write. If the protagonist does not become a demon god, he will be tortured in the Magic Forbidden. The protagonist becomes a demon god too quickly. I guess many worlds will directly push it sideways and directly follow the invincible flow.

I feel like the protagonist's character is a bit crazy

I feel like the author will make many people crazy if he writes in such a mentally disturbed state.

What the hell are you writing? This protagonist has some shit in his head. Those women of yours were summoned by the system. What the hell is that Keya? He's just a native. People who don't trust the system. My good author also has shit in his head

Terumi Mei: Are you just playing with me? Male protagonist: Just in heat

If you like Xu Miaoyun, just say that you don't want to write it like this. Looking at **, you have to make the soul of your wife appear as someone else. If you dress as someone else, the person will look different. He is neither the protagonist's wife nor Xu Miaoyun himself. Why don't you let the protagonist's wife's soul appear as Queen Ma? This way Queen Ma doesn't have to go so early and decisively**

Three thousand taels of gold is the salary of the little devil and the entire Kwantung Army? One tael of gold is equivalent to thirty or forty silver dollars. Three thousand taels of gold is equivalent to one hundred thousand oceans. Is the entire Kwantung Army only ten thousand people? And this is only ten yuan a month's military pay. For two countries, one hundred thousand oceans is nothing, can it be considered a loan? Does the author know how to read?

The front is fine, but the further back it goes, the more it deviates from the track and becomes a cult product.

Author, if you don't use commas, just put spaces. Others may think it's a system bug.

It's well written, but I didn't write it down electronically~ In fact, it can be written as an invincible novel. There is no need to blindly pursue the development of the original plot and write a good ending~

Hua Chenyu is indeed annoying, but we hate him because we don't want to see him. I don't even want to click on your catalog when I see it.

Your uncle, I would like to ask where the work is related to the author.

It doesn't matter if you worship Liu Haizhong as your master, but when you are actually afraid of Yi Zhonghai and the deaf old lady, your colleagues in the courtyard cannot watch Yi Zhonghai and the deaf old lady as long as they don't go to death.

Updates are a bit slow, do you dare to update again? Seven updates a day is not enough.

More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates! More updates!

In ancient times, age was not considered when recruiting disciples. How could it be possible that if you are older, you are the senior brother? It depends on the order of entry. If you don't even know this, how can you write a fanfic? When writing fantasy, strength is the only criterion for status.

It's not easy. It doesn't matter whether you support the Great Shang or the Great Zhou. Neither the Human King nor the Emperor can practice. At worst, after the same calamity has passed, the protagonist can just find a place to practice and let the Great Zhou and the Great Shang fight again. Even if they are mortal practitioners, they will not interfere.

No update in three days?

I predict the stallion version of Tregear, the evil smile version and the cowardly version.

Although the male protagonist picks up so many women, the plot feels too frustrating. It is better to change it to provoking the girl's suitor. Family or friends will deal with the protagonist, and then involve the girl the male protagonist hooks up with. This way, instead of facing those girls, the protagonist can also fight back or be cruel. The protagonist in the current writing is too weak, even if he is a soft rice, he will be forced to eat soft rice.

Satellites, they should be called satellites in the sky, right?

I think this one is better than that one with more than 200,000 words anyway. Keep up the good work.

It's a green turtle, do you know?