Writing a Diary in the Wuxia World, I Become the Heroines' ATM

Since you are a time-traveler, you should know that Xie Xiaofeng is not dead and roughly where he is. Also, many time-travelers have deep feelings with their families as soon as they come over. This is bullshit. People nowadays don't dislike the poor and love the rich. You can have deep feelings if you come here through the seal. It's a bit fake.

What the hell?? After reading the opening chapter, I lost interest. I wrote a mixed martial arts story that opened the sky and shattered the galaxy. . . You're so awesome. People who don't know better would think you write fantasy about cultivating immortals.

He is a brainless person again. He woke up at the age of 20. The beginning of the diary is rubbish. The first diary entry is to mark out women and tell them everything. Haha, what kind of thing is this?

There's an evil spirit in this main character

When I was describing my swordsmanship, all kinds of terrifying lights, world-destroying swords, and Jiang Biehe were driven into pieces. I laughed so hard that I almost died laughing.

Grandmasters travel all over the world, and in a world where heaven and man are inferior to humans, if you are born with enough talent to travel around, you are afraid that you will not die quickly enough, right?

The gold content of his understanding is incredible? The protagonist's intelligence lowers the value of this talent.

It's very good, the writing is interesting, and the subject matter is very novel.

If I remember correctly, in the original work, Yan Shisan's evaluation of Xie Xiaofeng's father, Xie Wangsun, was that his martial arts had reached the realm of transformation. Even if Xie Wangsun is a top master in the movie, not to mention that the Dragon Swordsman is his uncle, I still feel that without Xie Xiaofeng, Excalibur Villa will become inferior.

When writing about weapons, the author should not use these general adjectives. It is better to write about the size, width, etc.