
Comprehensive Comic: I, Guigu, Am Cultivating Immortals, and I Attack the Evil Yukino at the Beginning
综漫:我鬼谷修仙,开局袭凶雪乃
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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768.3kReads
22.6kFlowers
10.0 · 1.2kScore
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The protagonist who speaks freely and cannot control his mouth is really poisonous. The reader does not have any sense of detachment or empathy from God's perspective. The capital word "awkward" is used. If you make the protagonist completely bald all of a sudden, is it still valuable to the emperor? People who don't want to think about how awesome Yuan Tiangang and Li Chunfeng are, haven't they worked hard for Li Shimin and Wu Zetian? The protagonist, a modern time traveler who speaks openly and doesn't know how to hide his weapons, stands at the end of the long history and faces the feudal imperial power. Can he survive to the chapter where he reveals valuable information to the emperor?
The description of Kunlun Mountain is a bit too small, it should at least stretch for tens of thousands of miles.
There are actually people writing about Ghost Valley? Will you add some mods?
Why are there no magic techniques?
34章写的太夸张了吧!
I think we can summon the Four Ghosts of Xiangxi to be the bodyguards of the protagonist. Of course, we can also create four original sisters who have practiced phantom magic and use them as an enhanced version of the Four Ghosts of Xiangxi.
The interaction with Yukino at the beginning was good The plot of the subsequent reincarnation is very ordinary You should play to your strengths Write more about daily interactions The main line is daily plot and emotional development +Just fight the ghosts
Where did your extra five points of luck come from? Chapter 4 is still talking about fifteen points of luck. But you start with ten free attributes and zero luck.
Isn't the protagonist DOOMGUY?