
Daily Variety Comics: Starting to Eliminate the Demonic Rift Girl
综漫日常:开局除魔裂口女
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- Completed
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- 695k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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Everyone has mentioned the highlight of being a cuckold, but how come no one mentioned the highlight of being forced to join the Goujiba Service Department in Chapter 4? Are you from a hypocrite? Why was his head pressed down again and he was used as a slave to others?
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I feel relieved when I see so many people scolding you.
Common problem. The characters are inexplicable, and the emotional lines are also inexplicable. Not developed at all. Just because of one transaction. They all fall in love with the protagonist but can't understand
Everything else is easy to say. If you want to write multiple female protagonists, at least balance the roles, right? How much do you like Yukino? From eighty-five to ninety-one, I haven't finished writing yet, so what? You can't live without Yukino, right?
The four basic forces, electromagnetic force, with this kind of ability, you actually want to show off like the illiterate Magneto?
There is no logic, and the combat power collapsed at the beginning. I don't understand that the author arranged it. I have never seen such a weak conceptual god. Please delete this book.
Possible poisonous points for readers here: 1. Soul penetration 2. Forced to join the service club by Hiratsuka Shizuka 3. Kasumigaoka Shiu and Eiriri liked An Yirunya, although they were betrayed and almost killed. 4. There was no reaction to Kasumigaoka Shiu's disrespect, and Kasumigaoka later showed no sign of asking for help in order to survive, as if capable people should be scorned. 5. Even though it was clear that she was being dumped, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's life was put in danger and she sought protection, but she still only offered 2 million in compensation, which is equivalent to less than 100,000 RMB. 6. The character design is a bit broken. The follow-up is still here, if there is anything I haven't found yet, you can leave a message here. If it's useful, please give it a like or something, just in case you can see my comments on other books next time.
At the beginning, I was really speechless when I was kicked by Kong Yinzi until I covered my stomach. Now why are the male protagonists acting like lickers and not getting angry? Just because they have a b*tch?
Good life! Reward! Kill the sun and destroy the beauty! Why spring breeze! Some of the people above are nothing but bastards!
You've already written a fanfic, why don't you change the setting so that Eiriri and Kasumigaoka also have a crush on An Yilun?
I read the comments that it was too early to travel through the timeline, but they didn't stop it? ? That's no fun anymore, **, let's go
The hero doesn't want to do business! Is it good to be a high official?
Even though this is closed, can you drive?
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Does the author have a misunderstanding about the realm? After becoming an immortal, shouldn't the mana in the body be converted into immortal power? Still has mana
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