In the World of Detective Conan, I Have a Speedrun System

After reading it, overall it's okay, except that the rubber fruit is a bit inconsistent. Besides, there are many devil fruits with many abilities, so why did you choose this one? It feels difficult to operate, difficult to use in the general direction, too noisy, and has a low level of performance, unless you can awaken Nika, but Nika's laughter is too magical, and it is difficult to say that it is powerful, and it is suspected of lowering IQ. . . If you really have to choose, any one of the natural type Thunder, Darkness, Shining, Freeze, Magma, Burning, and Forest will do. Thunder is the best solution. Although it is badly written, in reality, this fruit's ability is indeed the most comprehensive and top-notch, with maximum destructive power. It is extremely operable in a modern society that requires electricity to run everywhere. Moreover, elemental energy is basically immune to physical damage, and its own safety is guaranteed. In addition to the natural type, superhuman type fruits are also good. For example, the surgical fruit involves many abilities. It can also be used in the world of Conan. If it is well developed, it can be immortal.

At the beginning, he asked Xiaolan why she was not with Kudo, and then she saw that Kudo was with the police just now. Is the protagonist mentally retarded?

These two chapters are really **, the gin is riding on the protagonist's face and he doesn't even get rid of it?

It's not good-looking. The male protagonist's idea is that there is no need for reasoning. Times are progressing, so he directly monitors the world and installs cameras in every corner.

If the protagonist joins the organization, then the plot will start to drive people away. After all, the protagonist's combat power is too high and he is not afraid of the organization at all. However, he forces Belmod to be unable to distinguish between the big and small kings, and forcibly prevents Gin from being killed. The protagonist is forced to join. Maybe from the author's point of view, it is reasonable for the protagonist to join out of fun and fun, but from the reader's point of view, and all the characters in the plot. From a pornographic perspective, the protagonists are all coerced by "powerful" organizations to join the organization, and they are completely outcast. The author is thinking about the plot at that time when writing, and readers will understand the context when reading a book. After all, it takes less than ten minutes to finish a chapter, and the previous plot has not been forgotten. It is different from the author's state of mind when coding. The author has ideas first and then the plot, while the readers have ideas after reading the plot.

Instead of writing a good article about promoting women, I just started writing a plot... Okay, is it starting to fall apart? From our point of view, it is whether the protagonist joins the plot of Jiu Guang to make people unhappy, not whether the protagonist should follow up casually and then slowly agree? Whether you accept it or not, this protagonist is being calculated... The attitude of being so deep and angry with Jiu Guang after not killing Gin Jiu? After being plotted against, you still feel stupid enough to think that you want to treat someone like a piece of wool?

Eri, the bus concubine of all worlds, must be revealed by every Conan fan.

Damn, in the latest chapter, when we went to the villa, you let the female character sit with that impostor? It doesn't matter if you don't have the jet ski in front of you and it's not a fake. That jet ski in front of you is outrageous in a public place. What's happening here? And he's still a fake Shinichi? Is it a deliberate trick? A little green?

You're really good at jet skiing, but you're a bit crazy. There must be other tourists in public places. Are you doing it live in public for tourists to see? Can the author explain it?

The main character is a non-competitive character who doesn't intentionally over-dramatize the plot. He has normal IQ countermeasures for everything he encounters. After accepting the task, he opened the door and revealed Yoko Okino's ex-boyfriend, which made me laugh. When I saw the chocolate later, I immediately thought of eating it for the president and took off immediately. This idea is also in line with the IQ of a normal person.