Building a Cultivation Family, Starting by Marrying Li Hanyi
打造修仙家族，从迎娶李寒衣开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 21k Words
- Subgenre
- Wuxia Cultivation
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
10Chapters
875.5kReads
2.4kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 4
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The opening is so familiar. I feel it would be much better if I changed to a different opening. I personally feel that many children and many blessings have been written badly. Aren't there short videos and other topics recently? For example, if the male protagonist is bound to the AI automatic editing and shock system, the male protagonist can randomly cut himself into any strong person, such as Ye Fan in the film Zhe Tian, and finally say the famous pretentious line, I am the emperor of heaven, and I will defeat all enemies in the world. The edited video can only be watched by the female protagonists, thereby generating shock value. The shock value can be exchanged for talents or skills from the edited characters.
. . . As long as it rewards an ordinary spirit body, it will be fine. Innate Holy Body Taoist Fetus? Isn't this thing a step into sainthood? Why is the protagonist also self-proclaimed? Self-cultivation? Moreover, even if the Innate Sacred Body Dao Fei has no cultivation, he can sweep through the mixed martial arts with his physical body alone. This writing does not have the strength of the Innate Sacred Physique Dao Fei at all. It is better to give the protagonist a qi training method and Xiantian Dan to practice by himself. This kind of physique rewards some lofty names, but the result is not even one ten thousandth of what is described in the original work, which affects the perception.
Money Villa does not go well with cultivating immortality. There is no ethereal feeling. I hope I won't be like other people who take wives and concubines. Just keep marrying and having children, and in the end the heroine and the children are gone. It means unlimited marriages and unlimited children. I hope the author can write more carefully. Stop just giving birth
Money Villa. . . Let's just say that we don't need to change the name to something fancy, but can we change it to a more normal name? This name doesn't seem to have anything to do with cultivating immortals.