
Comprehensive Comic: Rebirth of Gods, Creation of Meiluxin Family
综漫:新生神明,创造美露莘眷族
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- Ongoing
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- 260k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
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- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 2y ago
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- Faloo
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There is only one word: embarrassing. Mora is a catalyst, necessary for transforming materials, and has always been introduced in game transformation scenes. Mora will be consumed all the time. It is not the bubble economy you imagined. Not to mention that the prices of items in the game are like dishes. The dishes in the game also have attribute enhancements. Why is this avoided? Right? Not to mention the wages of the three workers in the main line of Liyue. First of all, their jobs are high-risk jobs, not to mention the rewards for adventurers. People risk their lives. In fact, the game comes into contact with very few civilians. They are either bosses, peers, or commissions. As for the price of entrusting adventurers, have you read fantasy novels? Therefore, in-game prices are just in-game prices, real prices are not so frothy, and ordinary people who have not shown up are actually living a normal Teyvat life. Therefore, the bubble-like mora value does not exist. Finally, if others don't say it, Ningguang is the richest man. The reason why Shangquyu Pavilion is distressed is because it was built by her little by little. It is similar to something to place a dream on. It will feel distressed, not money. Even if it is one to one with soft sister coins, 5 billion is probably not enough for the value of her collection. The gold content of the richest man is not that low.
Moreover, what kind of trash is the Enlightened One? He is a transcendent being and omnipotent in the universe.
The world view is very well written. Don't write it again next time. Gods are born in nature and nurtured. As long as you are powerful, who is not a god? I still have the protective shield of gods in my heart, which cannot be broken by others, and the writing is just like the setting of the game. Other novels are all cultivated to the extreme, what can't be done? Time, space, destiny, cause and effect reincarnate. As long as you are strong enough, you can do anything. But in this novel, the levels are so strict. If you can't do it, you can't do it. Gods and non-gods are stuck. The author's brain is filled with water, and the things he fills are still excrement.
For example, this sentence in Chapter 22. Everything has disappeared without a trace. Instead - everything is gone. Or just delete that yes, this yes has no meaning here - everything disappears without a trace. Another example is this sentence. ——Esdeath is very resigned. The attributive expression of this sentence is wrong. It should not be "extraordinary" but "expressive" or "extraordinary". ——When the empire is finished, it will be my turn. The yes should be removed and used as an adverb. Adverbs are usually followed by verbs or adjectives. ——This super parallel existence is outrageous. It should be changed to say that the existence of this super parallel is very outrageous, and it is still a problem of missing words. Not to be picky, but what you wrote is difficult and uncomfortable to read. Either it lacks a definite particle or the predicate and object are wrong. I suggest the author review it carefully. Even if the online article is not good at writing, at least the basic sentences should be smooth.
Gods are not gods but they are enlightened. They first become gods and then become omniscient and omnipotent.
Author, will you write about The Realm of Sora in the future?
It's too little. Update it quickly. If you don't update 100,000 words in a day, how can you mess around in Feilu?
That's it? Author, are you afraid that we can't afford it?
By the way, if the author wants to write seriously, he still needs to make the protagonist really invincible. After all, the protagonist's talent is not special. You have written it yourself. There are other gods, so give the protagonist some special abilities to make the protagonist invincible. Otherwise, if there are people who are almost as strong as you, it will be very troublesome to make the protagonist.
Stars, suns... The author's common sense is touching. This may have been written on a computer.
More, too little, not enough to watch
I'm going to watch it once and I'm satisfied. Why haven't I posted it yet?
I just want to say that he is an author,
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