In the City, Bound to a Fantasy Simulation System

The subject matter is good, but the writing is poor. In just ten chapters, the ex-girlfriend breaks up, the simulator is turned on, the old-fashioned hero saves the beauty, drawing symbols, the Qing Gang, Qi training, supernatural powers, and the current boyfriend of the ex-girlfriend. . . A lot of things are squeezed into such a short span of about ten chapters. The key is that your writing skills are not good. You write here and there with a hammer here and there. If you don't write clearly, you skip to the next thing. It's aimless and you think about it one by one. It's really too complicated and messy. As for the plot arrangement, I don't know what you're thinking. The protagonist got a simulator. He didn't want to mine the simulator and improve his own strength. He actually wanted to draw talismans and sell them for money? Brother, is your protagonist so angry? So little city government? Don't you have any scruples at all? Without knowing the details, he exposed his extraordinary abilities so brazenly? Don't you even have the idea of ​​just hanging out for a day or two? When someone encounters a situation with supernatural powers, they deal with it like a brainless fool.

After reading the introduction, I knew that this book was nothing more than pretending to be a slap in the face, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger.