Genshin Impact: In Inazuma, I Joined the Chat Group

The plot has changed a lot, but you haven't changed Sakura's plot. She has been transformed by the old bug. What do you want to do? Test the reader's bottom line?

The skirmishers will not die. If you die, you and your horse will die together. You like to be a *child for your little one, right?

Don't kill the skirmishers? Moisten it

The Foolish Shadows just cut them off. They interfered in the government affairs of other countries, funded the rebels, and tried to detonate the heart of the Mikage Furnace. The Shadows just chopped off all the executives, and then went to Zhidong to chop them with a knife. The Ice Queen did not dare to say anything. After all, a real fight would alarm the laws of heaven and the maintainers of the laws of heaven, and then Zhidong would have to be nailed!

I don't know what you are writing. First of all, you use the original title but write a large chapter about Fate, which is purely about selling sheep's meat. Secondly, there are many events in the article that I don't know happened in the original work, and many things happened inexplicably. For example, Raiden really became a servant. How can you, a pure foreign soul, be seamlessly compatible with Fate's system and directly become a follower? There is no foreshadowing at all, and the second is the first Fuyuki's Holy Grail War Singularity. I don't even remember this plot in the original flo, and the prologue is different from this one. Of course, the first two questions can be said to be the author's own design and I haven't seen much FGO, so I am ignorant. However, your original plot has many OOC characters, first of all, Thor. How long has Thor adhered to the concept? Can your protagonist break her defense by saying nothing? Then there is the fact that your knight will not die with your bare hands. No matter how strong you are, the one opposite is also a companion artifact. How can I snatch it away from you all at once? But these are all small problems. The biggest one is how can you, the God of Thunder, cry and scream to give it back to me after someone takes it away? Tora Chiyo did it herself back then. The most likely way to get the sword taken away is to get angry and chop you with all her strength to get the sword back. To be honest, my opinion is that you should just write a flo fanfic.

Damn it, originally it looked good, but I had to write about Sakura being transformed by Poison, but you just don't want to, omit it, or write it to the Golden Diamond family. Byd writes that Sakura has been transformed, and I also want to make you laugh and write a paragraph specifically for ex readers. You really don't want to write a book well. It's probably some Poison author who opened a trumpet to take revenge on society.

Come back to supplement the book review. The Holy Grail War did not change Sakura's fate. The one who was saved was someone who had been defiled and transformed by insects. What's the difference between this and not being saved? Wait until the war starts to come back and make up for this plot. It's better to change the plot directly. Anyway, the heroic spirits you participated in have been changed, and the Fourth War has also been changed to the Holy Grail War. What if Sakura's plot is changed? Writing like this adds a big poisonous point, and I will be scolded in a hurry.

Sakura is hopeless? What are you doing?

You don't even need to read the article or the comments to know that the author is a pervert and can't write "Go away"

As long as the author refuses to accept the original CP and fan fiction, it will be useless. There is a fanfic about the beauty world that writes about the eunuch who does not eat the fireworks of the world. The main character is Tang Sanzang, which is annoying.