Making Honkai Impact 3rd with the Valkyries

All I can say is that after ten chapters, it doesn't feel inconsistent if you change the names of Bronya, Brownie, Alicia, and Eden to Su Yue, Su Qing, Zhou Ya, and Zhang Yao. This is just a purely urban character, with just a name and appearance, and almost no core. There is absolutely no trace of their behavior that resembles that of Yaya Aili and the others. If you think it's a bit crazy to set up a fanboy who says "Miss me" from time to time to Alicia, or a rich silly singer to be Eden. It is recommended that you don't try hard to write things that you can't write, and try to write things that you are familiar with and can write. Otherwise, not only will it not increase traffic, but it will also increase resentment, thank you.

There is too much nonsense written in the early stage. The title of your book is making games, but it takes too long to get into the main topic. I guess you can stick to it. Not many people will read it.

First of all, Destiny was not created by Otto, although he did rule it for more than five hundred years. So the author, you wrote this wrong.

Is this a brother-sister romance novel?

It's been ten chapters, do you still remember what the title is?

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There are a lot of useless routines at the beginning. The title and introduction of the book are about making games. It's useless to go straight into the whole chapter without opening the chapter.

What the hell? It says that there is another dragon clan coming to do something. The title of the book is Honkai Impact 3 and there are other things to add. It's inexplicable.

Commentary on Chapter 30: A Family on Twilight Street in Tsujino's book "Honkai: Making Honkai Impact III with the Valkyries".

Although the major is the earliest version, I think it is better to change it to the later major.