Age of Discovery: Meteor Strike on Mary Geoise from the Start

You are no longer opening high and low, but opening high will kill you. The first time you drew Tianzhen Zhenxing, it was okay, the second time Shadow Corps was just fine, but you ran out, and the third time you drew cooking skills, and the fourth time you smoked to sleep, what are you writing? Smoking these lj things once a year

There's something wrong with the introduction to your book. If pirates don't fight on their own, how can they be thieves? If the pirates rebel, then they will become the army! Looking at the introduction, it seems that he is on the side of the pirates! It's quite ridiculous, while talking about the evils of the World Government, at the same time whitewashing the evils of the pirates! Either you are evil yourself, or you have to cut off all the evil! You, the protagonist, are both worthy and established, and you are well positioned to compete with another Tang Buddha!

As for Demon Slayer's breathing method, it can't even compare to the inner strength and mental skills in the martial arts world. And the ripple qigong in JoJo is many times stronger than Demon Slayer's breathing method. It can cultivate the power of the sun and live forever. Don't blow a Demon Slayer blade.

I don't know what to say about these skills. For you, Tianzhen Zhenxing, it's not bad. For ninja, it's okay to use it on a daily basis. Wei Mingli seems to be a wolf. I don't know the combat power system, so I won't comment on it. But. . Breath of Thunder? Are you serious? Can this thing be considered a stunt? You have to say that the breathing of the sun is reasonable, Leihu. . Strengthening the feeling won't have much effect on pirates, right? And you are so good at swordsmanship, and you can only do it once a year. . . What's the use? The one who has been strengthened is not the breathing method but the protagonist, right? If the protagonist can perform the Flying Slash, then it is the protagonist who is stronger and not the breathing technique, right? I'm not saying that breathing techniques are bad, but each one you smoke once a year is more useless than the last. . It doesn't make sense. . Except for throwing meteorites, other skills are better than the others. Throwing meteorites has a five-year cooldown, and isn't the stunt unique? There are not just one or two people who know how to breathe thunder. . .

Don't force me to do anything, everyone is a bad person. The winner is the good guy.

In a novel with no structure, who do you think travels back in time to find history? Is history important? It's not important at all to time travellers. If you want to find history, you might as well wait for Nika to find it. Didn't you know that Raff Drew wrote that non-* and Nika are not allowed to enter? You want to overthrow the Celestial Dragons, but you use history to overthrow them? Anyway, if you want to focus on the plot, you might as well go with the boat to see something interesting. The writing of wandering around all day long is not immersive, the plot is mediocre, and you always have to speak with a light voice, and say it indifferently, it is really **

The Holy Lord template only has one Black Shadow Corps???

Damn, this introduction... The pirates fight on their own... Fighting on their own refers to warlords, who are both good and evil... The white beard group counts as one, the red-haired group counts as one, Kaido barely counts... It's hard to say about the Big Mom group, after all, she requires national tribute. Giving up one's life is not simply collecting protection money... The other pirates are just beasts doing evil everywhere. It is too inappropriate to describe them as fighting on their own. It makes it seem like they are rebels. They are obviously a bunch of beasts doing evil everywhere.

The pig's trotter needs a strong physique. For the pig's trotter, arrange the physique of the Hulk, the physique of Arthur Neptune, the physique of Wonder Woman, the awakening skills of the Supreme Martial Emperor and the Supreme Martial Saint in Dungeon and Warrior, or the qigong ability of the qigong master, the blue fist's ability is also good, and the sword soul is also good. . . . .

By the way, Charlotte Lingling's family still lacks the Draconian race, so she introduced Brother Ming to Lingling to give birth to a Draconian child. . . . .