The Hope: Taking Cheng Yushan as My Disciple and Enjoying a Lie-Flat Life

In fact, you don't need to go out of your way to emphasize some emotional playfulness or the like. This will look very artificial and make it seem like you don't care if Cheng Yushan and the others find themselves in the arms of others later. Be pragmatic, this is Fei Lu and it's a cool article. I know you want to slow down the pace, but no matter how much I ask you, there is no need to write it like this. Just do some Shura fields or something normally, otherwise you, the protagonist, are really a loser.

The protagonist asks the tadpole to find its mother again.

A person with expert fighting skills stretched and twisted his waist??? Do you want to be so exaggerated? Even Teacher Ma can't twist his waist, okay?

Everything else is acceptable, except for one thing: Never have an affair with Sang Xia, otherwise I will give this book a hundred two-star ratings every day. The more Ming Long chases after him, the more broken and deranged Sang Xia's character becomes. There is no way he can recover from it, so the novel should not be unappetizing.

When writing a movie variety show, don't make it look like the protagonist has never watched the movie, and don't set up a rigid character, like a high-hanging monk character, but what he does is to open a harem. I would rather you be more straightforward and say that I just want to open it and make money. There is really no sense of what is on the surface and behind the scenes.

Zhou Weifeng's plot is too poisonous. It can be solved in one go, but he insists on using it to seduce himself...

For now, you can read it. Just don't write too outrageously. The cheats are enough. Don't keep driving.

Damn, blushing, sorry, silly, was this written in Feilu? Female channel?

Everyone has their own different ideas. Sang Xia is originally an idealist, so it is normal for him to be idealistic when choosing courses. He is from Bai Fumei, and his family has no shortage of material needs. When he graduated, he worked in the school and faced only students. He did not have the sophistication of society. Being a psychology teacher was also his hobby and dream. So he won't say anything too realistic based on his personality.

I think it's really not well written. The protagonist has a feeling of being both real and independent.