Showbiz: While the Goddess Was Still Innocent, I Talked Her into Marrying Me

You said you smoke, just smoke. Can you add a scene of "holding a cigarette" in your description? Have you never smoked in your last life? I have the same problem as N. Is it because I can't write without holding a cigarette? Forget it once or twice. In every chapter, every time you describe the protagonist, you are holding a cigarette. Why don't you write about the protagonist holding a detonator when you are so good at writing? This is powerful enough.

This is no longer a question of emotional intelligence. With just a few words, even a stupid person can tell what those women mean. The protagonist seems to have no emotional intelligence. If you say that young people of that era may be really reserved and don't understand, what the hell are you doing? As a contemporary time-traveler, I still don't understand, are you filled with tofu in your head? It's been on the shelves for so long, and it's been ambiguous. The ambiguous protagonist doesn't even know the situation. It's so cool. Isn't this just a pure idiot? You are not as good as Dashachun in The Sorrow of Charlotte.

The writing is quite good, but I don't understand why he keeps mentioning cigarettes over and over again. How can it be so exaggerated for normal people to smoke?

This protagonist is the worst person I have ever seen. No matter what he does, he always has a cigarette in his mouth. He idles around all day long and has affairs with women. He obviously has more than one billion, but he opened a company but let it fail. He signed a few artists and was not responsible. He has no staff in the office. He only exploits his own women. Being kept by myself, to put it bluntly, she kept PUAing her, leaving her with no independent personality. She was completely wasted by the protagonist during her rebirth at this time. She had so much money in her pocket and had the foresight to develop it even if it was given to Gou Gou. As a result, this bad protagonist did not develop. It is estimated that video websites, literature websites, movie theaters, Weibo, WeChat and Tiktok will all be missed.

You can take your time with other things. At least the fairy mother and daughter must be put away quickly, otherwise it will be really boring to watch.

There are always close-ups of the protagonist holding a cigarette in the book. It makes no sense at all. The number of words is completely ridiculous. If you hadn't reported it, I would have reported it to you.

If nothing happens to Xiaoli in the future, I will be sorry for what you wrote about her.

I didn't recommend any of the eunuch articles, they were all about ambiguity, and I still have literary youth problems. I wrote about movies that I had never heard of, and deleted readers' comments. Don't chase me anymore, it's a waste of my money.

Regarding the rhythm of a book that kills itself, there is not a single woman in more than a hundred chapters. It's the author who can't do it. Or do you think readers can't?

Now there are actually people writing about being fucked*