Honkai: Star Rail: We Said We'd Slack Off Together, So How Did You Become a General?

Shangxiang, I haven't updated it in 3 days, I guess it's getting cold.

If you write less of this kind of bad plot that pretends to be a slap in the face, your results will be much better than now.

In the latest chapter, don't you feel embarrassed to forcefully write Star Iron together with a slap-in-the-face plot that is common in vulgar literature? When the title of the book already indicates that the protagonist is a show-off, you forced yourself to write such a vulgar plot, just write it once, and then you continue to write it. It is easy for people to think that your book is just a slap in the face of the Dragon King in the skin of the Starry Sky Railroad.

A total of 1 update in 2 days, not very impressive.

The first few chapters felt good, but after reading more than 20 chapters, I felt something was wrong. The life I set out was not about intrigues, ridicule, or fighting for fame and fortune. With the help of the system, you can enjoy the simple pleasures of life. It is recommended to read more content similar to Wulin Gaiden type. . .

The memory of a time traveler is the same as that of a native. And the latest plot is exactly the same as the Dragon King returning to Wu Naowen. Even the ridicule is not innovative and the name is changed.

The most annoying type of author is that he writes and stops writing, and waits until one day he remembers to write again.

Topa: You BYD is still haunting you, right? Why are you everywhere?

To be honest, the first few chapters were okay, but in the end, especially when Qingque asked for leave, it started to soar all the way. The first is the small problem of Huanwu's battle against Jingyuan. What is written here is that the clone suppresses Jingyuan, but the real situation of the game is that although Huanwu is the King of Extinction who is the least good at fighting in the world, in the plot, her body is made by the divine power of Jianmu. It can be said that she has a dual destiny of fertility and destruction. The power is also the most perfect body that she has certified. In other words, the peak of Huanwu can't defeat Jingyuan, who is hundreds of years old and is unable to attack with all his strength. Although he has the help of the train crew, it is enough to show that Huanwu does not overwhelm Jingyuan's strength. What's more, Qingque asks for leave. Not to mention whether Qingque's EQ and IQ will say such misleading words, are the people in Taibu Sili and Fu Xuan blind? Qingque's belly didn't grow even the day before and she asked for maternity leave the day after? Does Fu Xuan really believe it? If you think Fu Xuan takes this as a reason for asking for leave, forget it, but the result is that Fu Xuan takes it seriously. Finally, there is Ruan Mei. Your protagonist has neither fame nor strength. Even if you tell Ruan Mei that she drugged you, Ruan Mei's attitude will not change. No matter how many times you say that she drugged her, her attitude will only admit it and then give you the answer. You give her the medicine because she won't believe you. If you don't take the medicine, she won't tell you that much at all. Especially if you write Ruan Mei said a lot in the end and just let the protagonist go, it's even more impossible, because then it's up to you whether to tell the truth or not. She won't place her trust in someone she just met, and she won't bet on whether you will tell the truth.

My writing is obviously quite interesting, but at Feilu's speed, I'm really afraid that you will become an eunuch because of the loss of readers.