Siheyuan: Relentlessly Raking in the Benefits

The protagonist can effectively fight back when being bullied. It's nice and interesting to watch. In fact, it doesn't matter whether the violence is serious or not. The main thing is not to feel aggrieved. Unlike some Siheyuan, the author is obviously afraid of not having to write and doesn't have the guts to do something serious, so he writes the matter so seriously. In the end, he just talks about it and doesn't fight back. It's uncomfortable to watch.

Three pounds of crucian carp? In those days, only local crucian carp weighed about half a catty to one catty.

Author, how many chapters do you plan to write in this book?

Too little, you are too lazy, right?

The plot of this book is actually pretty good. The protagonist's counterattack is reasonable and logical. The grievances and grievances after marriage are also written very clearly, from being good buddies with the friends in the courtyard when they were young, to being young and married. Quite interesting. There is only one shortcoming, the character design is not good. The most important thing is that the heroine is actually Yu Li. And what about the first woman of the protagonist? Why is there just one chapter?

Yu Li is not good at culture or work, and she doesn't seem to be able to have children yet.

This Siheyuan is just right. People of that era are really not as bad as other books. Writing about people as heinous to the point of demonizing them, but not directly blaming them, always making excuses, and leaving them to rape themselves, not only reduces intelligence but also destroys logic, it is simply poisonous, as if you can no longer write after leaving the Siheyuan. This book describes the neighbor as a little bad guy, and then fights wits and courage in a relaxed and freehand manner. According to this rhythm, it is quite comfortable to read.

It's Yu Li again, can't she make her own?

Describe the protagonist: 'Smooth talk but really bad at work'! Most people who write about Siheyuan try to give the protagonist a chance to develop and have a future, even if it's ugly. They find a way to do it. What you wrote is like this. You spend every day in Siheyuan, letting the main character play with his mouth, play and ridicule all the beasts, you write too much. I don't know what you want to do? It makes people feel that Qin Huairu is much smarter than you. You married Yu Li and trapped your book in the original Siheyuan... "Qingman" is said to be the story of Siheyuan, but how many people have read the original work? What everyone wants to see is the prosperous era with the theme of courtyard houses

Commentary on Chapter 17 The Welfare of the Meat Factory in "Siheyuan: Crazy Sheeping of Wool" written by Mr. Nancheng.