Short Videos Across the Myriad Worlds: The Protagonists Lose It!

The lines didn't even match up. The fire escape turned into a raging fire, which made me confused. Messy

Can you go to the sea of ​​​​dead fire? It really means that you don't have to use paper fingers to go to the toilet, right? You might as well call it a concentration camp.

Later chapter names are gone! Awesome

The following chapters don't even have a title, what about a hammer?

Don't put things from the Mi family in the rankings. Yuan has become more and more clowning recently. If I really want to rank Ran, I might as well write about Haihu's first decisive battle.

Nowadays, there are so many second-generation novels, but in the end there are only a few left.

One chapter is an introduction, the rest is all water

One thing to say, the type is good, and the content of the inventory is also good, but your habit of randomly changing the names of moves needs to be changed. Isn't it better to just use the original names? You have to give it one, such as Blood Ghost Technique, you have to call it Blood Demon Technique, Breath of the Sun, you have to call it Fire Magic! Wait, wait, wait, I don't know if it's because you changed the name or if there's something wrong with the translation. Anyway, it's hard to explain.

Why do I feel like my writing is a bit bad, many sentences don't seem to make sense.

What the hell is written, I can't understand it at all